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Curious_caravan

Curious_caravan

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2018-12-19 JoinedGlobal
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  • Curious_caravan
    Curious_caravan11mth
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    Let me sum up in short. The story is good but the execution is bad. It is fast paced to the point it feels rushed after the gravel world ark. The end is even more rushed and illogical. The character are well made but the world background lacks depth. There is nice and interesting evolutions at start but again only few lines are used to evolve them after the gravel world ark. The logic is lacking quite a lot. There are many system holders of even higher ranks yet his second rate system can surpass them all. System holders that has lived for millions of years can't beat him who has live for 2 decades.And many more of such incidents The only good thing is that unlike many other monster genre books, this book sticks with the concept of monster till the end.

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    Monster Paradise
    Eastern · Nuclear Warhead Cooked in Wine
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    Curious_caravan1yr
    Posted

    I loved your previous work and this looks good as well. I just hope in the process of generating ideas you do not devalue the wow factor of book 1. I just don't wish to see a repeat of what happened with naruto after release of boruto.

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    MMORPG : Rebirth Of The Strongest Vampire God
    Games · Raj_Shah_7152
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    Curious_caravan1yr
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    is she gonna uncover the secret of zoro's left eye 😆😂

    "Ahhh, the power sealed in my left eye. Don't worry. Soon, your existence will be revealed to the world. It's time. Yes, the time has come for a protagonist of the world." 
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    I Become Baby Mafia Boss
    Fantasy · Zehell2218
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    Curious_caravan2yr
    Posted

    This is a very interesting novel with a nice concept. I read it after I saw one novel with a "shop based" theme to have so many chapters after finding the world's and beyond. And it did not disappoint me...at start Atleast. Though after the store was transferred to another planet, it deviated from its theme of a store and turned into a cultivation novel. Instead of focusing on pets it only focused on their master and pet use just cast aside as some add onns That was truly a let down.

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    Astral Pet Store
    Eastern · Ancient Xi
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    Curious_caravan2yr
    Replied to AshyAtmosphere

    you are quiet knowledgeable. I did try to name each character based on their personality.

    " I shall name you Nhi."
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    Emperor's path
    Fantasy · Curious_caravan
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    Curious_caravan3yr
    Replied to MistofOblivion

    Well ananta true meaning is endless/infinite...one that can last till the end of time....so it may be used as "to be lost in time" eternal and endless/infinite have similar meaning ..but there is still a difference. eternal is defined and everlasting ananta is undefined and everlasting

    (TL note: State of anatta is the state of non-self, to forget one's own existence.)
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    Super Gene Optimization Fluid
    Sci-fi · 9 lightyears per second
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