Chapter 261 is a beautiful demonstration of how to screw up a story. It's amazing to believe that you managed to screw up your book with just half a paragraph, congratulations, that's really impressive!

Já sei o que vai acontecer, porque devo continuar lendo?

Is his mother an idiot?

Um bando de personagens mal desenvolvidos. Ao contrário dos comentários que eu li, isso não é engraçado, é apenas mal feito! ...................... ............. ........

And now he's going to give himself to the world, in an abrupt way, just to make the script easier.

A idéia parecia boa, mas até agora a execução está muito confusa, acho que vou parar por aqui... Esperava mais dessa história :(

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When I read a good story, I put myself in the protagonist's shoes, so I feel angry with the other characters when they do something stupid (even though he have reasons for that). I think the people who criticized think similar to me, but that's not to say the characters are sloppy, or anything else bad. It's just us, being hot-blooded protagonists!

The story starts out good, but gets much worse with the introduction of the sect's ancestors. I read up to chapter 64, the protagonist loses all his personality and don't fight to keep his opinions and dignity in front of the cultivators, in my opinion, in the current chapters, if we exchange the protagonist for a rubber penis it wouldn't make much difference. * But I'll give it a good grade because the first few chapters were nice and I had a lot of fun watching a mortal not cower in front of cultivators

The story started out very well, the protagonist acted like a normal person, and defended his will even when he was in front of cultivators, but with the introduction of these ancestors, the protagonist simply follows whatever plan they decide for him, the ancestor speaks and he keep quiet (not to mention, in this chapter, that she spoke out loud and he immediately shut up)...................................... ................ The relationship with these women trivialized the future relationship with his mother, in my opinion the conflict he had was the special part of this story. Of course, that's just my opinion, and even then the story is still ok.

Vlad

Victor is addicted to battles, I think he is a Sayajin.

I really liked this story, the effect of the wine, the personality of the people and the fact that the protagonist doesn't hit everyone, on the contrary, the objective here is to solve the problems with a good old alcoholic drink

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É um livro divertido, acho que vale a pena... Se tiver algum br ai, leia e se gostar, vote! ...,.........................................................xd

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