90% narration, 10% character's talking.😴 ,.........., .... . . ..... .... . . ....... ..... ... .... ....

Giving the intro for luffy and his crew in this part will be good right?

Gotta say this story was the perfect one for me. I mean, theres nothing rush in here, no too much overpower or mc being a hideous/a*sh*le person. Thanks for this author-san✊

yeahh that nmight be the easiest way but I dont think the author would do that. I mean he pretty much prepare all the important events and scenario for some future Developments.

though i'm kinda confused right now, didn't the mc says that naruto was his favorite anime??? or im jut imagining things... then why is he thinking that he just know it from this moment?

the pase was rush and ruined the proper stuffs,though the idea is good but the first chap was very rushed

heyyy use some his, him, they, and he sometimes no just duke infinity. duke that was so redundant

thanks for the chap. its kinda refreshing how Damian do things in 'Damian way'

definetly a lie it is

im confused because even without her marrying to aella he would still become a king bevause his father is a fricking king why make it so confusing?

eyy author san...you should limit the use of the name for fricking many times and use something like or she...just my opinion this made me feel cringe:-)