I'm just a mad man trying to regain his sanity. Bad grammar doesn't make someone a bad Author, not fixing the mistakes is what makes someone a bad Author.
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ah I thought that's a grammatical error
said the girl whose brain circuit is in her b**bs
*Don't make fun of him. He might burn your house down. ?
There are more things that you can do if you run out of ideas. Game scripts! or even RPG Board Games! game scripts as in Lore, you can use games with deep lore for example Witcher, Dark Souls, Warhammer, Mass Effect and Dragon Age. And also you can write the world background for Dungeon and Dragons!
*At the moment
don't use "very love", that sounds uncomfortable and I'm pretty sure it's incorrect. Use "she loves her little Tian very much" instead
*his personality
I can't read through all of the chapters, I don't have any more brain cells to lose. The grammar and writing quality is bad, incorrect tense used, typos, and the worst of all is NO COMMAS. Huge Paragraph with no commas, it makes it uncomfortable and harder to read because you don't know when a sentence ends and when a new one starts. I thought writing 3 other books will surely improve your writing but I guess not
sir, this is a Wendy's
blow up allies? that sounds gae