very nice story, but feels a tad bit rushed, more character development would be nice, as well as some POV from different characters or maybe a side story of who was doing what meanwhile. Also, where is the cool beauty from his academy that was taken away? a side story with her and a final reunion would be nice. his "wife" dissapeared and haven't heard of her since. He promised to visit his academy previously, what happened to it? Nothing side story from the principal or a POV from a random student there? Where's his friend from there? What's Gandulf's background, we don't have much there. As sages follow him, there must be some political intrigue somehow, empires/kings must have a tough time, what's happening with other countries and academies? The points system is no longer valuable in terms of points, feeling like it stops at 10, which is maxed out, so far the system has been a helper to absorb stuff. Started off with some gaming vibes and ended up as a full cultivation wuxia style. i thought there would be points in agility, stamina etc... There's a bit of lack of spells for a mage imo as well, 2 defense spells, 2 fire spells and 2 darkness spells so far added a couple of thunder, feels very underwhelming for a mage. Everytime he becomes more perfect that absolute perfect, and between the famous terms "heaven and earth" feels a bit weird, he was absolutely perfect couple of chapters ago and suddenly he's more perfect than perfect and more perfect than absolute perfectness 2 chapters later. A clear scale of power appart from tiers and understanding of power levels and strengh would be much welcome.

thanks so much for this book, that's awesome. I'm a bit lost on the levels he has, some stat reminders would be cool :D