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Same opinion here! Would add another level of immersion in thhis novel
In my opinion, this version of your writing would have been fine. You coild just have added some reminiscing chapters that talked about what he experienced and things like flashbacks sikilar to how you added the memo of howard and maria stark in that video.
Why do I feel like you are looking forward to the spanking ??
Thanks for the chapter! Also please the next chapters say your earliest convenience
Happy New Year!
It's one of the best HS DxD fanfics I've ever read. Keep up the good work!
It's one of the best HS DxD fanfics I've ever read. Keep up the good work!
Sorry for your loss, I hope his soul rests in peace.!
Thanks for the chapter!