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To be honest, this has a very good storyline, but releasing chapters in bits and pieces over a prolonged period of time makes a very good novel a specially lousy one.... It seems the author just has no interest or care in his writing the novel... Or he may be sick and possibly on the verge of death and still tries to produce something towards the conclusion of this novel... Anyway, whatever the reasons, I advise of just pulling out and canceling your novel if you can only produce 1 chapter a month...that makes this good novel entirely useless... Thank you.
Excellent. The excruciating events of the sidestory has given way to the Main story(which is the important part of this novel) May this story never wander off again from what makes this novel alive. Thank you. Hopefully we can now stick to the storyline.... Peace to all.
Nice chapter but the train of the story seems to be going nowhere by shifting the scenes on side topics when our concern is still with the UN and the rescue of the prince's. This is just a side note on the main story line in my opinion... No matter how well written in its details and such...
The author does not seem to know how to humanize the character of the MC. . He may as well be a Golem or a robot...
A bit too asinine... Analysing and soul searching during a fight? Unrealistically juvenile.... Not so very riveting nor attention devoting in any way.... Sorry! Just mho...
To author Authistic25, this novel of yours I consider so far to be as great as that by Er Mu's "Release that witch" which is a classic. Hopefully you will not suffer the same fate of being forced to end the novel prematurely and leaving a lot of loose ends to a superb storyline such as this. Again, CONGRATULATIONS and Much gratitude for this novel so far. Hope the romance aspect will not be downplayed.... as it has been so far.
Wow! As in... WOW!!! Much gratitude for those chapters. Hopefully you can sustain such kind of mass release... My giving power stones despite no chapters have been worth it. Thank you. Again, I say... This has the makings of one of the greatest novels here... Kudos to you Author... đđđ