JusteMoi

Really good story, with a strong concept and background 👌 👏 Just to much detail in the description ... It takes the most out of the chapters and seems irrelevant of the following story 🙃 🙄 All in all good work, I hope to read more about it 😉😇🧐👌

repeated chapter

"The" Author [img=recommend]

frankly speaking your writing turned into a fantastic character development in the end 👏 👌

this is the right path for a debuting author !

blacksmith, sculptor, tailor... would become craftsmanship or something like that 🤔

Good story, with immersive world which grab you easily 😀. The character are really well designed and even with some writing skills that can be improved for the mess-up gender, the overall is still of good quality 👌. If I have one big problem with the book, it would be the rushed ending... I don't know why the author did this but at least it would have been more easy to accept with just a little more chapters than rushing it with three paragraphs and one lines for the ending . Still, I recommend you that novel because even with the rushed and bitter ending, the book is still one of the best this year! 👌 👍