Bad plan !

why is he still level 1 divine sovereign? Didn't he spend 16 years somewhere cultivating with meiyin and the witches?

What's the difference between it and original yun che? is following exactly the same path, even raping the little fairy. It should have been her choice, if she prefers to die then she should have respected her choice. I'm pretty disappointed with the MC, he's worse than the original

This romance with salem is so annoying and forced, she is the worst girl. It doesn't make sense that he transported himself near her when he said he just wanted to go to a safe place, if he wanted safety he should go to artoria or meridia.

This romance with salem is so annoying and forced, she is the worst girl. It doesn't make sense that he transported himself near her when he said he just wanted to go to a safe place, if he wanted safety he should go to artoria or meridia.

don't forget to open all of her profound entrances.

Idiot

What a huge waste of time, an entire chapter to teach a wimpy magus a lesson.

Thor and Sif's child will be thrúd ?

It would be hilarious if morpheus appeared in their dream during a threesome with kara.

NO salem !

No mercy for villains, I don't like DC heroes because they are so hypocritical. They arrest the villains and the villains always escape, this cycle seems to go on forever, and many innocent people die in their conflict.

Your MC sometimes seems like a possessive sociopath, has some pretty crazy thoughts and ideas.

Forget about mami and any other girl, just have a good romance with chizuru.

I would like to see Thor's family's reaction to his dragon son named Kamish. But after Thor came back to your house you didn't write anything about it, does your family even know about his existence?

I love your story, it's amazing. only one thing bothers me, the MC likes to prolong his fights unnecessarily, why not just crush kokabiel in a few moves like the clown he is?

Leah

How funny, one body snatcher ratting out another.

Trash

No crossover