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Dashman

Dashman

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I'm just waiting on my personal ROB to come and pick me up. Until then I'll just keep reading everyone else's adventures and maybe writing my own.

2018-12-07 JoinedGlobal
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  • Dashman
    Dashman7mth
    Commented

    The MC is kinda a

    Ch 4 Lang
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    I Have An A.I Chip In A Post-Apocalyptic World
    Urban · Parzivaall
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  • Dashman
    Dashman1yr
    Commented

    while it would have happened anyway that was a little forced.

    "Fine. Be you. But mark my words, Bruce. You keep this up, and you'll soon find yourself all alone," Dick said, suppressing his anger as he turned to leave, stomping his way out of the cave.
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    The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)
    Anime & Comics · Wicked132
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  • Dashman
    Dashman1yr
    Commented

    Bruh I know you got a story to tell but is your MC naive or dumb? One second he's super paranoid next a blaber mouth. Not even gonna talk about the guy with a shield getting bullied😞

    'I've thought of many ways to use my ability. Things involving the unseen of the world. I need to improve before I can do any of those things. I shouldn't say any more than this, I've already said too much.' Leo thought.
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    KINETIC
    Fantasy · MagusRex
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  • Dashman
    Dashman1yr
    Commented

    Like hitting a rock!!!🤣😂🤣

    The ripple of sound washed over the disgraced champion of Shazam, his hands clasped over his bleeding years in a grimace of pain. I jumped towards him and buried a fist on his belly, pushing him towards the sky, while following him closely behind. The next strike caught him on the the left cheek, whipping his head to the side. Damn, it felt like I was punching hardened rock. Despite being disoriented, Black Adam was conscious enough to sweep his hand out. I ducked under the move and landed a chi blocking blow on the underside of his arm then at his armpit. 
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    Aden Strong: Avatar In DC
    TV · Saintbarbido
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  • Dashman
    Dashman1yr
    Commented

    not funny anymore. if you not going to update it then get rid of it.

    [Inventory: shirt, skirt.]
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    UNLIMITED SPEED
    Fantasy · Adamoforder
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  • Dashman
    Dashman1yr
    Replied to N_D_L

    Yep. I know its time consuming and after awhile people, start to skip it anyway. So how bout a description when he 1st gets the skill and then just the name later on and if you must a detailed description at the end of the chapter. Personally I would only do Stat changes like wis 3 > 5 or HP 210 > 270. *** Blade Slash lv 2/5 *** NEW SKILL

    Ch 4 Black Flame!! Legendary Soul Dew?
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    Alchemy System: The Ancient One's True Descendant
    Fantasy · N_D_L
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  • Dashman
    Dashman1yr
    Commented

    like the story but you only need to do detail status once then you can just show the updates or do a detail at the end of the chapter.

    Ch 4 Black Flame!! Legendary Soul Dew?
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    Alchemy System: The Ancient One's True Descendant
    Fantasy · N_D_L
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  • Dashman
    Dashman1yr
    Commented

    That sounded so Saturday morning 🤣🤣🤣

    "He intends to use the combined force of the Religion and Intergang to take over the city!" she concluded, turning towards her mentor for confirmation. But the latter had already started walking away.
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    The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)
    Anime & Comics · Wicked132
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  • Dashman
    Dashman1yr
    Commented

    You really think her mom's is going to let her leave off the Kardashian in her name?🤔

    Pedro wore a set of designer black jeans and a black hoodie which one of his conquests bought for him. Alongside that were a pair of sweat black and gold sneakers made by North West, the daughter of the late Kanye West. 
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    Guild Wars
    Games · Kotario
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  • Dashman
    Dashman2yr
    Commented
    Stat points:2
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    The Extra's Survival
    Fantasy · Mohitkumar
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  • Dashman
    Dashman2yr
    Commented

    You are doing OK for a 1st timer, but I can tell you are rushing. My advice is to write everything down just to get it out, then go back and flesh out the story once you got it out of your system. Good luck!!!

    Ch 5 Training camp 2
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    Gamer System: Marvel [Dropped]
    Fantasy · Timoteo_Cubero
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  • Dashman
    Dashman2yr
    Commented

    where in the world did he get a bell???

    After I completed my plan I began to put it into action, I laid several tarps around the vicinity, and added a little bell to a tope connecting to them the traps and waited for a rabbit to fall into one of them. After a while, I finally caught one, the trap it was caught in was near a snake's nest but I didn't know at the time.
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    Doomsday Survival System
    Urban · Rankuza
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  • Dashman
    Dashman2yr
    Replied to TigerBlooImmortal

    I don't understand his choices either. 1 more chapter to bet better then drop.

    Ch 5 Waifu/Husbando Creator
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    4X Life
    Sci-fi · SLOP
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  • Dashman
    Dashman2yr
    Commented

    Why would he automatically think that. She has given no reason to be suspicious which makes the General sus!!!

    General Alexander had his doubts about Lisa story, it seem too fantastical to be true. Yet he didn't see any reason not to let her communicate with the boy. It would at least allow him to observe and see if she was in league with him.
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    ( DROPPED) Technomage with A True Magic System
    Fantasy · Zeebie
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  • Dashman
    Dashman2yr
    Commented

    Even though it has shades of spider man that back story makes no sense. You would do better by having the MC want to go back to save his friends instead of his ego.

    Ch 3 Chapter 2: The Silence before the Storm Part 2
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    Throne of the Grand Magus: The beginning
    Fantasy · LordofKaizen
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  • Dashman
    Dashman2yr
    Commented

    GOW or DMC????

    All he could think about was a character from a video game that would also pull enemies closer to him. Cyrus smiled, using the systems equip function, the armor appeared on his body. The sleeve where the armor was supposed to cover the shackle instead got shoved under it. The shackle remaining visible. Cici and Cyrus noticed this and Cici was interested on how he put it on so quickly.
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    My Chaos System
    Fantasy · Xander_Everflame
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  • Dashman
    Dashman2yr
    Commented

    great start and like the concept, but its confusing in the beginning about who the MC is and who died?

    Ch 1 New beginning
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    SUPER GAME DEVELOPER
    Sci-fi · Redston
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  • Dashman
    Dashman2yr
    Commented

    Somewhere in another galaxy a pair of eyes are twinkling!!!

    "That's a secret." I said "But with it, she would become a puppet in the palm of my hand, but I don't like using it on good people unless I have to, fsince it would be for the greater good of the galaxy."
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    Star Wars: The Holy Empire
    Movies · Necromancer_God
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  • Dashman
    Dashman2yr
    Commented

    Really!!!!! Now approaching drop territory.

    Jack didn't look for the source of the voice. He recognized that the voice was from the sulky fairy companion that the Goddess had bestowed upon him, though he hadn't expected the fairy to be able to communicate with him from her hiding place. It took him just a moment to realize what the fairy was talking about. It was his new weapon's active skill, Overlimit. He had completely forgotten about it during this high adrenaline fight.
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    Second World
    Games · UnrivaledArcaner
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  • Dashman
    Dashman2yr
    Commented

    interesting story keep it up

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    中日韓統一表意文
    Fantasy · LordofKaizen
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