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pafro1yrPostedI'm at chapter 61, story was good MC joined strawhats for a good reason but the mc quickly becomes stale and lacks personality. additionally, MC gets a horrible devil fruit that is based on luck from the author and it doesn't feel like a one piece power more like nen. so I lost interest and stopped reading it 3/5 not horrid just disappointing
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Anti Cannons - pafro1yrCommented"What's my name?"
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she was
Kuina, the descendant of the God of Swords, her swordsmanship talent is no less than Gion, who is the Vice-Admiral of the Navy. - pafro1yrCommented
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C. A rewritten and improved version of the original (Chapters up to 2nd year of Middle School are done.) - pafro1yrCommented
isn't the mc stronger than Neij at this point
In the original timeline, Something must have happened to the Original Rai, or in retrospect, me, and if I died, that means team two was disbanded and seeing that Omoi and Karui had talent in Kenjutsu, Killer Bee took the two in and started teaching them... just hope that I won't have to face Gaara or Neji, I don't have the "Talk no jutsu" yet. - pafro1yrReplied to Reaper2504
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35 seconds, 4 points, 2 caps and 2 rebounds! - pafro2yrCommented
God King
[Heavenly God] . Supreme Realm - pafro2yrPosted
Wow I just read 16 chapters straight and this is garbage the MC is reincarnated first born son with wishes and lets his family walk all over him. The story forces itself to stick to cannon even with a hilariously overpowered MC who is to much of a cuck to change any thing. Believe the other reviews, I did not, this is trash.
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Awesome idea author! it wouldn't effect future sight though since that's not intent but sensing the future
'It would be great if I could actually utilize the mark's abilities, never mind the incredible physical boost from the mark, the 'Selfless State' ability of the 'Transparent World' could make me unrivaled in this world. Haki is what the residents of this world rely on in combat, observation Haki is all about sensing your opponent's intent in order to predict their moves, even seeing into the future by sensing what they will try to do. But what if I had no intent? The Selfless State allows me to completely mask my intent, which could render observation Haki useless.' - pafro2yrCommentedCh 7 Chapter 7 - First Combat and Encounter
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wow fastest drop ever
Wish 5: Create a curse the when im born me and my peers are hit with a the training seal/curse that was designed to make us have De-Might (being of weak will) De-Magic (have less magic and connection to magic) Fate limiter (having less cognitive thinking thus not being good at anything) De-Smart (not smart), De-Wisdom(not wise) Slow thinking (slows thinking capabilities) but at the same time is training our souls to be at the limit of all that, this curse starts weak but it goes stronger so that means that the more we try to fight the curse the more it will benefit us, obviously this curse will have an instinct to try to seal us to 10% of our capabilities to all times but also gives us a way to feel how to fight it by instinct, so it will need a system-like status were we can read how are we doing and what need to be trained more, this curse will stop getting stronger itself at 18 years old allowing us to breaking it and freeing our new real capabilities (the training techniques still work but it's better when we are under the curse, like an 100x exp bonus) - pafro2yrCommented
what is dead may never die
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I f he a pure mage why didn't he choose vampire
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Stannis Baratheon - pafro2yrCommented
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Tytos Blackwood - pafro2yrCommented
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Wyman Manderly - pafro2yrCommented
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