ToddHoward

That line is cold af. Imagine unleashing an ancient god only for another more powerful one to appear and lay down some hella diss.

I knew it. 1 chapter in and already had big chinese writing vibes. Unnecessary and length exposition (treating reader as if theyve never seen Naruto b4). Inreractions between characters felt off and kinda cringy. Also the phrasing felt awkward at times. Thank you for pointing this out good sir.

Theres always a hint. Good thing this one was obvious. Also a good sign that the rest of the story might be shit.

Cheeseburger chant intensifies

This novel is peak. Author used an overused concept but executed it extremely well. Great writing quality with little to no grammar or punctuation errors, which is surprising given most novels on this app. It seems planned out very well and progresses steadily without lingering too long on any plot point. The preaching at the beginning was so well written it had me believing in a fictional god.

That explains the vomiting lol

Iroh only joined tye White Lotus after Lu Ten's death. At this point in time, he wouldn't have even known about them.

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