Genedrag

I want to point out how forced this feels. Instead of running after he broke through the canyon trap, he stayed and let them attack him instead of running away, and instead of fighting back, he just dodged. The girls kept attacking even though they realized it could fight back but didn't there were so many better choices that could have been made, and none of them were. Just stupid forced confrontation that just damaged his zoid for no reason, and now there's the liger that is conveniently attacking the village after his zoid is damaged. If you wanted a convenient confrontation, then why not just have the liger fight in the village first and then have the girls follow him back to his workshop after his zoid is heavily damaged in the battle with the liger. Hell, you could have had the girls call out the fact that he never attacked them and had the girls try talking. Instead of attacking him, by the girls own words, he wasn't acting like a beast. Now I'm going to say this before you commit back to me about my opinion in some way, and we get into some stupid argument like the last time I left a comment about me not liking how something in some ones story went and they took offense to me having and expressing my opinion if you don't like my opinion then ignore me don't argue with me about my opinion like the last 4 did because they couldn't stand someone not liking how they wrote there story and posted it in the comment section....sry but after multiple people keep starting arguments about me expressing my opinion I wanted to cut it off before another one happens if you don't like my comment just say so and leave it at that.

I left comments expressing my opinions because I felt like it. You're the one that started arguing that my OPINION was wrong. Seriously, get over it and leave me alone.

Hay, I just thought of something actually productive you could do instead of trying to argue that my OPINION is wrong why Don you go and actually finish one of your stories and stop bothering me to satisfy your hurt little feelings AND STOP MESSAGING like I said.

Not one nt twice but three times you have commented back to me just to get the final word god your patedic and sad.

Then his ability isn't no upper limit. Its unlimited potential, the difference is no upper limit, which means his growth never stops or slows while unlimited potential means as long as he keeps a steady progress he will still advance even if it's slow.

Uh, huh, so explain how to actually fit all the required technology in micro form barley a few centimeters thick armor without said armor being paper thin because let's be honest so far I haven't seen a material strong enough to actually be worth using as armor that thin I mean mass effect has energy shields for a reason even the weakest weapon in mass effect is a hyper dense penetration needle shot from a handheld Rail gun powered by ezeo armor that thin is just useless unless you have a true indestructible material otherwise just slaping basic armor on a space suit and then adding a personal force field is just easier and more feasible. After all, powering a force field alone is easier than powering all the required technology to make power armor that small actually work, and before you say nanomachines, first you need a material that meets the indestructible requirement to make the nanomachines out of for them to be used as paper thin armor then you have to figure out how to program and design nanomachines how to come together to reproduce power armor abilities without compromising structure support environment protection and other important features all of which require massive amounts of power after all first you have to make a power source that small to even have a chance of making anything work so no without ether some kind of half assed explanation or out right magic/supernatural nonsense it breaks immersion so BY YOUR OWN WORDS ether keep to (Technological Progression) that at least have somekind of explanation or out right say its magic nonsense. The fact you're so defensive of a single random person saying that they don't like how your story goes shouldn't matter, the fact that you choose to argue on a commentary I made means you know I'm right but don't want anyone to say it because it brings attention to the empty plot hole you didn't want to explain so ether say yes I'm right and change it (aka fill in the hole with believable nonsense) or ingnor me and move on.... or delete my comment or your story because you can't handle random comments that shouldn't even matter. No matter what you choose, I win because want you should have commented back to me was something along the lines of. [Well, good luck finding something you like, but I never meant for this story to be taken that seriously. Have a nice day.] So, in summary, no matter what u do, I win because you will either. A. Fix the plot hole. B. Ignore me and say whatever, then move on. C. Delete my comments or your story because you couldn't stand someone else's opinion. But no matter what you choose, I'm dropping your story because you couldn't handle one person saying they didn't like something in it. Not because it was a bad story no its a good one. Not because of the plot hole itself I would have gotten over it and ignored it. No I'm dropping your story because you tried to argue logic and when I pointed out the hole in that logic you tried to argue fantasy so now that I've pointed that flaw out you trying to argue with me means it's not about your story at all you just don't like my opinion so don't comment back to me because it doesn't matter.

Has your story reached the point of magic like feats that explain the completely impossible/unrealistic abilities/physics of Ironman armor? If so, explain how if not, don't try to justify unrealistic/impossible feats in a (Technological Progress) story.