This feels like watching a Wuxical fantasy movie and the grammar is very good with less errors with a simple yet suspense filled story!
I might sound naughty but uhuhuhu , I’m fallin fo the dragon already!
That's where the victory lies, her soft moans during our little fight and when I kissed her . The little moans that I'm not even sure she noticed proves that she is attached to me…not her soul but atleast her body is.
"Ades help me out please!" I whispered ,standing up and holding Ades hands. So much have changed about him, his angelic hair is all gone now replaced by an almost bald cut with only a layer of silver giving him a really rugged edge.
"Angel Bella" Raphael's cool voice that reminds me of the ocean wave brought me out of my thoughts as I ignored Gabriel and gave him my right hand as he gently placed a kiss on it.