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I have a theory. Is it possible that he can only imprint on someone when his romantic and friendship meter reaches 100. Because in the Sims 4 when that happens then the Sims are considered soulmates. Which means that he could theoretically imprint multiple times.
You know becoming a magic caster in Sims can be quite powerful provided you can use all the spells that have been in the Sims game series. Like Sims 2 had actual time stop magic. And bot Sims 3 and 4 can resurrect people. By the way can he use alchemy? Because it has some cool effects and if he ever changes hi mind on immortality he can just drink a potion. Ps: is it possible for him to cultivate a death flower or a money tree seed?
Why have you written Hades like he is afraid of offending or angering Poseidon. Poseidon, Zeus and Hera are prideful bricks if you walk on eggshells when you interact with them then they are going to walk all over you (use you like a doormat). Ps: sure Poseidon is unpredictable by normal means but Hades now has the power of divination (weird you haven't used it yet).
I like this story and I like almost all the works the author of this story has written. Unfortunately I don't think you're SirLuciferMorningstar are you hyvnn. https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13488656/1/A-Precise-Note
Loving the story so far but I do have some questions. But before that the description gave me an impression that he had some sort of future sight or planning power. I'm not saying his current quirk is bad (it's actually really cool) but it does bring to mind the first 2 questions. 1. Can he infuse his pieces into other people? 2. Can he see or sense his pieces or his surroundings like a game board or will he gain a sense like that in battle? 3. Can he switch places with the rook? 4. Can he use the healing to speed up his physical development (because in some fics healing spells actually undo the gains you would have gotten if you had let the pain pass naturally).
Well why don't you spell it out to me. Why the leaders of a supernatural faction didn't ask question a child who didn't appear to have any power. No magic, no touki, no senjutsu (the power he does have can't be detected). What are you going to say that the guy who brought them there told them because he didn't ask any questions either.
This fic has most of the Harry potter fan fiction tropes. 1. The house elves feed on their masters magic. (Untrue in the source)(also a random house elf suddenly appeared after some one asked) 2. Goblins conduct bloodline tests and just give a random relative the vaults and lands of their ancestors. 3. The MC is a relative of ravenclaw(HOW), Slytherin, Pendragon, Le fay. 4. Heir rings are a thing. (I'm just clad there are no magic cores in this fic.) This is my personal pet peeve but using accio on Trevor. Nevermind the fact that it isn't a spell a first year should know and the fact that it still isn't clear if it could or couldn't be used on living beings. I just don't like it being used so often. I mean what's wrong with point me. The MC himself doesn't even use the template system it's just there. The MC invests throu the goblins into Muggle companies. The DND classes were probably chosen by the authors personal experiences. Black dragon sorcerer, necromancer wizard, circle of the land (Arctic) druid.
So none of them question how the boy knew or saw all of those atrocities. I mean he is a "normal" human kid from a bloodline with no relation to the supernatural. Who somehow has the memory's of the five principles an no one questions him about it. And that last part about the situation with the second in command that he shouldn't know because this is his first time in Kyoto and all he has done is sit in a single room in a mansion with akeno. I mean seriously one paragraph where he says that he is a powerful seer, or a psychic and all these holes would be mostly patched.
Ok fair but will the signature be fully horcrux/Voldemort or will the signature have traces of the host as well. I mean it wouldn't make sense that there wouldn't be any trace of the hosts signature. Wasn't Ginny at least semmi aware of what was happening when she was possessed.
So I maybe misremembering this and I am sorry if I am but can't he use the same ward that was used on the door to fluffy (or is it to advanced)? I mean I'm pretty sure that everyone has a unique magical signature(sound). So if he can make a ward that records the signature of anyone that enters the bathroom (which isn't used because there's a creepy ghost living there) then he could quite easily find out who opens the chamber.
So I have a feeling that he is thinking of using the eye in some way to bring x-23 to normal. That of course shouldn't work because the eye is about sight. It would grant the user to view the mind and soul of a target (maybe even the body if you stretch it). It would also allow the viewing of the shadow realms or it's denizens (Pegasus used it like that). Maybe it can be used for clairvoyance seeing the present (upgrade to see the past/future). I believe that the millennium key is the best item to help x-23 because it can be used to lock up the triggers. Maybe the rod can also be used because it can be used to control the minds of others but it feels less reliable.
This may be an unpopular opinion but the Norse gods aren't the best characters either. Don't get me wrong I believe that the Greek gods (especially Zeus) are much worse but the Norse frequently go back on theire word and break promises. Examples the giant that built Asgard didn't get what he was promised for the work, neither did the dwarves that made Odin's and Thor's weapons (granted the dwarves wanted Loki's head but still) and there's a lot of evidence that shows that Odin knew about baldurs death and didn't to anything about it.