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NUM2918mthReplied to Sage_Kong- NUM2919mthPosted
Fucking end me. Alright, here’s what’s up. Story is disjointed, busted up, and consistency is questionable. Why? Because I’m a lazy writer who onky writes when inspirstion hits me like a truck. Then I’m left unable to keep writing due to my inability to maintain a decent thought for more thn a minute. All themes this story may have ever had? Ignore em. Fuck em. It’s just raw entertainment and character fctor now. Every chapter from like 1 to 22 was made over the span of like more than 1 year. I don’t remember. Everything after that is slightly better in quality. I can assure like 2 things. One, fights eventually become well enough entertaining. And uhhhhhhhhhh, writing quality gets better.
- NUM2919mthPosted
Definitely an interesting read. i’d suggest it. Not my cup of tea. And I can’t be bothered to get past 3 chapters at the time of review, then again I’ve read a loooooot of novels. Writing quality is relatively decent, with few mistakes. Very creative in description, making super good use of details. Though, the fighting scenes do kinda get a bit goofy. World building is big. Considerably detailed or at least it seems so, I’m not deep enough into it to know. Plot development is definitely intense. Starts off with whole kingdom getting fucked. Kinda odd the Archilles would just… let em live considering how evil he is, and the fact he isn’t more cautious considering he just got attacked. But I get it, story has to happen somehow. Character’s are understandable. That’s all I have to say. First few chapters, the characters you see are basic. But that’s to be expected. And basic doesn’t equate bad. Overall, i can’t say, read more than 3 chapters if you want truth.
- NUM2919mthCommented
Incredible, that’s like… a twentieth of Mike Tysons punch.
The punch carried a massive power, defying what a mortal punch could be. This was more than just a punch, it was more like a cannon that was used for besieging castles and fortresses. A punch so heavy, Prince Neebo feels that the weight of it is about 20kg. - NUM2919mthCommentedCh 1 The Notorious Prince Neebo
- NUM2919mthReplied to Sage_KongCh 2 Chapter 2: Resurrection
- NUM2911yrCommentedCh 5 hm
- NUM2911yrCommented
The person or people who made this system must’ve been crazy good at their job.
I couldn't help but feel a little disappointed. Just 8 more zombies…oh, well. I was sure I could make up that number on the return journey. I shouldn't complain – just today, I had earned a lot more Kill Count points than I expected. - NUM2911yrReplied to TomoyukiCh 6 Amidst the Leap
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Nothing to be sorry about, much appreciated sir
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Oh, kk
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10/10 Advert isement
"Uh, Versatile Mage." I shrugged. "We even have the official web comic translated and published here in the Webnovel website, you know?" - NUM2911yrCommented
Man possibly single handedly more overpowered than just about everyone. Converted money into straight death. I’mma be calling him sir Orochimaru. Because Orochimaru carried like crazy during the war.
"They had better be," Zhi Yong replied with a scoff. "They cost me all the credits you gave me." - NUM2911yrCommented
Top ten assassins lists be like:
"You kids think you can kill me?" The assassin sneered. "I'm from the Dark Shadow Guild. I've been killing even before you brats were born." - NUM2911yrCommented
Me personallllllyyyyy
Oh, that was awesome. I love Szechuan food, even though I couldn't eat anything spicy. I was about to open my mouth to warn Pang Fei about my lack of tolerance of chili when a blade punched through my chest, puncturing my heart and killing me instantly. - NUM2911yrCommented
YEAH, NEEEERRRRRRRD. Imagine reading webnov- UHHH, ABORT MISSION!!! ABORT ABORT
"I'll do my best," I promised, not wanting to sink into a quagmire of self-loathing and depression. That would piss off the existences from a higher dimension further. They didn't come here to read about me whining about myself. "Anyway, class is starting soon, so let's go."