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SkyWatcher1yrReplied to Quarkaye my bad lol i don't know what is going through my head when commenting that anyway it's all good now as i just don't like Ex-President Trump and and anything close to his name at that time. i usually go and double check the word meaning before correcting stuff like this, but this one slip past me i guess...
This book has been deleted.- SkyWatcher2yrCommented
Jin saying Lol is just not his characteristics. it's just feels disturbing
"Lol. There was one point in time I thought you would know how long I would live but it seems like you only looked at the changes and predicted how long I could live." Jin said and told the System to go ahead with it and a large mystic circle instantly appeared in the hall of the massage chairs, activating the time dilation magic so that they could enjoy the Virtual Reality Instance even more. - SkyWatcher2yrReplied to Robert_Marrs
god damn it, i fell for it.
Hard Knocks - SkyWatcher2yrReplied to JanNiklas
now that i think about that it's like trying to charge your phone with solar panels with only the phone's torch lmao extremely stupid on my side there.
As long as nothing could be traced back to them, Jin was satisfied. The dungeon supplier considered this to be a short term plan as he believed that if he could travel to other worlds, and with the access to an interworld black market, there was definitely a way to import clean energy for his country to use in the future. - SkyWatcher2yrCommented
no need to add "my" there.
'Why does this insolent mortal handle me so? Do I have permission to ground her into dust where she stands, my master?' - SkyWatcher2yrCommented
Thus it is*
Not only will the temples suffer as their worth plummets, but so too will the pharmacies. The most valuable resource of an adventurer is his life. It is thus natural that a vast majority of the seeds that pharmacies stockpile are for healing brews." - SkyWatcher2yrCommented
their* lives. adventurers is plural and of unspecified gender.
Not only will the temples suffer as their worth plummets, but so too will the pharmacies. The most valuable resource of an adventurer is his life. It is thus natural that a vast majority of the seeds that pharmacies stockpile are for healing brews." - SkyWatcher2yrCommented
this is a bit too forced
Any herbs that he grows and mixes into elixirs will be of a quality unsurpassed, as if brewed by the forest goddesses themselves. Aine's memory will smile in his work." - SkyWatcher2yrCommented
they*
"When one works with life for so long, there develops a sense for growing, for knowing how life flows and how to nurture it. You can call it elderly superstition, aye, but I stand by it. It is that very sense that allows me to forego my sight and still tend to these lands." - SkyWatcher2yrReplied to durst
i like how you think, but please use autocorrect at the very least.
"I know how the land works," continued Old Thane. "I have felt it grow under my feet and tended it with my hands for years and years." He showed his hands to everyone, how the dirt had caked into folds among calluses that had been etched deeply into the skin by decades of labor. - SkyWatcher2yrCommented
this novel need proofreader
Old Thane laughed, his hearty voice echoing through the crowded walls of the cottage. "Not so, little on. I daresay that you have offered us too little." - SkyWatcher2yrCommented
wrong use of "them" here as sylvie is in Jeanne party. it should be "us" or "all of us".
"No, Jeanne, that's what you want, not them," said Sylvie as she turned to meet Jeanne with a disapproving look. - SkyWatcher2yrReplied to
ah shit, how can i forget about that basic stuff...
As long as nothing could be traced back to them, Jin was satisfied. The dungeon supplier considered this to be a short term plan as he believed that if he could travel to other worlds, and with the access to an interworld black market, there was definitely a way to import clean energy for his country to use in the future. - SkyWatcher2yrCommented
and you're blind, these blind jokes are seeing no end huh? heh did you see what i did there? oops i did it again :)
"You've a good spirit on you, lad. I look forward to our mighty success." - SkyWatcher2yrCommented
too many commas makes my reading flow interrupted.
"You've a good spirit on you, lad. I look forward to our mighty success." - SkyWatcher2yrReplied to Ghoulxs
there are two ways to read "herb" the one with the "h" pronounced and the one with it Silent. tbh i prefer with the h pronounced as it was pronounced in my native language as well.
"Hm." Sylvie absent-mindedly played with her dagger by spinning it around her fingers. "An herbalist? I hear the exam is quite difficult." - SkyWatcher2yrCommented
this makes me think... How high is Old Thane's level?
The adventurers, on the other hand, were significantly stronger. The ones with bronze medallions were at minimum level 30, which was to be expected. From Old Thane's stories about his past adventuring life, Li knew that adventurers stood at the high end of what humanity could achieve. - SkyWatcher2yrCommented
make*
As Li made sure his hood was secure over his head, Old Thane called out again. - SkyWatcher2yrCommented
the grammar on this paragraph is messier than my life
"Will it hurt our farm any? Not in the near future. But the road will be blocked until the monster's been dealt with." Li leaned against the table and looked up. Habit it was, he did this when thinking. "I'm going to be going out for a bit, that okay?"