theyre husbands would probably advance a stage or 3 because of it...

which one?

fear and respect are 2 sides of the same coin. also he isnt in the same hemisphere anymore

and now the love interest has appeared boys and girls!!!!

make sure to remember that the lore was that the gates were a boost to chakra as well as physical strength gai and lee just dont have much chakra to begin with

when a student only has one ace a good teacher should do everything to help keep it a true ace for the rival battle we never got

id say if you do a rewrite having raven jhst slap negi with a ton of seals and beat him to the ground with a sticl would work better than a fair spar. but i did enjoy otherwise you showed hes not god tier after a yr of genin

ive been loving youre fanfict so far dont let people choose the story you are writing cause then itll be just banging your way thru naruto and ive read way more than enough of those for 1 lifetime

oor ge said something about the monster of a child being a broken game mechanic

id bet good money its just to build hype and have a very solid backlog.

exp

sorry ment to make it mkre apparent as a joke since most comment sections get flooded with people asking for harem protag and you staying away from that mostly being a huge plus in my opinion

is rean going to gather a harem of blacksmiths? i feel like this one may have fallen in love at first sight

i really enjoy the fact that you split their specialties with one focused on the economic side and the other focused on the training side. a major problem with most cultivation novels is they handwave how much work it takes to manage finances and be a genius, martial artist. both of your series do a great job showing that either you have to be a unique mind and or have 2 people to be successful without a large clan or sect.

i thought jirni was manohars royal babysitter marth is most definitely not equipped to handle that responsibility