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He should recreate DCU movies like Kevin Feige. Ian can be little more confident and ambitious. At the beginning he already had a few million in the bank. Then he’s proven his talent as a director with a treasure trove of more stories to steal from. Now he should create his own legacy, even if it fails he won’t go bankrupt.
And don’t say Ian is being rude. This problem won’t ever go away. If Ian had suggested to act in their softcore p%rn movies Mason would’ve said yes without thinking too much. Screenwriting, directing, being responsible? Mason can’t imagine it, he probably thinks Ian pranking him.
Imo neither of them are strong. Both the maid and Mason are only working for Ian due to nostalgia about his father. Except Ian is not his father. His father is gone and any attempt to explain that will be met with suspicion, dissapointment, and unrealistic expectations. Ian needs to prove himself first before he can make friends.
Yeah i think the System should only exist to give the MC an edge in their new world so they don’t die too early. Give the MC something to focus on and have faith in. Or they will be plagued with anxiety and drop the chain at the critical moment. There’s no need for a multitude of OP powers. Any ambitious character can grow to be powerful like Kabuto because most characters in the show become complacent.
Nitpicking is saying all of the characters in this story are very bland. No constructive criticism, just a straight diss saying “Do Better”. Aiden getting too absorbed in his acting is a real problem he would logically have in his career. There’s more to being an actor than just acting skills.
He’s a bottom agent. Meaning he’s overworked, stressed, cynical, so yes he takes out his frustration on people who can’t retaliate. Then when the MC gets revenge later he will try to morally kidnap him or scream about how ruthless he is.