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Chapter-1[Request] - Rapid_Ooze092yrReplied to Uncanny7Ch 11 Chapter- 11[D-Rank]
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A good start, The Prologue will make anyone who reads it to be interested to read even further chapters. And it also left some mystery elements about the sword making a person curious about what is that. And about the main character, he is portrayed as he should be according to his ambition and his age. Well, the rest could be said as the more the story progress. Hope the author makes the story interesting.
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I see...I will be careful in the future chapters...đ
The girl sitting beside me continued to stare at me, while I am looking out of the window, 'What happened to him, to change like this....and had he not recognized me...looks like only Emma could answer, and I am even feeling afraid to talk to him... ' sigh...' his eyes are way too much cold, and so is the aura around his body....', and thought - Rapid_Ooze092yrReplied to What123466
Her talent isn't mentioned yet...
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No worries, as it's what mentioned in what I am writing right nowđ¤Ł
Kyle then paused, as he saw himself completely calm, having no longer remembered her, which makes him happy..... - Rapid_Ooze092yrReplied to What123466
He had talent in the start....
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This one hadn't planned anything, but answered whatever its host asked.....which is more legit....and if a system had emotions then its bound to have thinking too....
['Looks like the Host already figured the quest...but why the hell my host hadn't asked me about my name, and here I thought I finally have a good host, well it is partially my fault for deleting his emotions....cause the previous one is just naive person.....but I think it's clear that the girl, my host's previous girlfriend loved him way too much...and her voice was also weird when she sad those words to that boy....but it looked like host got hit by quite some emotions, not even thinking straight...but it's good.....and he already started developing emotions for that girl, just from the memories, I wonder what would happen if he saw her again..?'] - Rapid_Ooze092yrReplied to What123466
You see, his hidden desire is to become strongest, but if he took the help of the system for everything, then it's of no point to think of becoming stronger.
"No, I will found about it myself, so..... tell me about my other sealed Bloodline, and about my name." - Rapid_Ooze092yrReplied to What123466
Even of he unlocked that much, he needs to train it himself to become capable of using it...mentioned as ths the authority levels, and the skill levels, along with elements efficiency...
[[Blank] unlocked successfully, Current percentage, 0.5%] - Rapid_Ooze092yrReplied to What123466
The white color seems boring now...
The system screen immediately went red, and Kyle clearly felt something coming from deep inside his body, and soon, red-colored energy started gushing out of his body, and Kyle was right now screaming, as he never thought that pain would be this much, he can't feel the emotion of pain, but the feeling of his body changing is still there, and when it is forceful changing, but he decided to pursue his passion for the strength and stopped himself from losing consciousness, and soon he collapsed, as every single ounce of energy left his body.