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  • KingSeshy
    KingSeshy1yr
    Replied to TRIYNN

    thanks it means a lot!

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  • KingSeshy
    KingSeshy1yr
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    Shameless review by the author. However, I will take criticism and any advice to heart and try to work on any serious shortcomings I have as a writer. Please comment!

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    KingSeshy1yr
    Replied to atomjack111

    Yeah, I know. It's a story, I didn't want to write a health guide and villagers wouldn't understand the intricacies of modern day health without long paragraphs of writing and boring explanations.

    "Sugars are bad for you, I should probably stay away from those..... wait... once I start cultivating my chakra I'll be able to eat way more and a good but unhealthier as well.... Don't worry my green little marble grape, I'll be back for you."
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    KingSeshy1yr
    Replied to Kami12

    thank you!

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    KingSeshy1yr
    Replied to Daoist_of_Fatness

    thank you I'll change it now :)

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    KingSeshy1yr
    Replied to AlwaysWatching

    what is this?

    He left the mirror and sat on his bed while looking at the floor. "Growing my martial arts.... Back on Earth I did do some mixed martial arts training for a few years but I only trained in muay thai, boxing, kickboxing, jiu jitsu, and Brazilian jiu jitsu. It's not like I was an elite athlete at them either, I didn't have that time."
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    KingSeshy1yr
    Replied to Nikhil_Chand

    I also currently have 8 draft chapters waiting to be released and in the drafts he has just begun the training.

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    KingSeshy1yr
    Replied to Nikhil_Chand

    You can't train your chakras until you're 18 and he is 16 so the only training he is capable of doing right now is for his body and martial arts. Right now the mc is working on his martial arts as well so people don't figure out that he's not the same genius he used to be. He's going to be training and making connections in the beginning of the story.

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  • KingSeshy
    KingSeshy1yr
    Posted

    I write quickly because I'm very busy with a job and also university. If you have any suggestions please let me know. I write on the fly so any criticism is welcome. If you find any grammar or spelling errors just leave a comment notifying me and I'll fix it.

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    KingSeshy1yr
    Replied to Nikhil_Chand

    Yes, this is what I thought as well and I plan to flesh out the female romance partners but there probably won't be too many of them. The main amount of females I want that romantically influence the mc is around 3, I don't want to throw around too many.

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    KingSeshy1yr
    Replied to Nikhil_Chand

    My bad, it didn't't pop up on my refresh page so I had to go to my inbox and I just saw your reply right now.

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    KingSeshy1yr
    Replied to Nikhil_Chand

    Yup, he's going to learn more about the previous owners body as the story continues, we will learn about the world alongside him. And yeah there will be an explanation for the transmigration in the future.

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    KingSeshy1yr
    Replied to Nikhil_Chand

    The average words per chapter are around 500 but sometimes around 700.

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    KingSeshy1yr
    Replied to Nikhil_Chand

    Thanks, I type fast so I miss some things sometimes. Thank you very much I'll fix them right now.

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    KingSeshy1yr
    Replied to Nikhil_Chand

    I'm writing the chapters every day and I'm making the story as I go. Do you want it to be more of a harem or just focus on one or two females? If I do make it a harem I'll make sure to go in depth with the female characters.

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    KingSeshy1yr
    Replied to SaxonViolence

    Yeah, I have a lot of school work and my outside job to focus on, I'm also focusing on moving so that's why I'm putting out shorter and more frequent chapters. Thanks for the comment, I'll upload an extra chapter for you today :) Also, what's ROTC, sounds familiar but I can't think of it at the moment.

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