OldFellow

Sorry but this is it for me, hate prophecies, and the fact that he went to the past implies that everything happening in the story wont matter since he will die alone in the past, also the fact that i dont really like time travel story’s where what you did in the “past” already happened on the current timeline

Hard to say on this fic, especially since several events have been changed from the books and show, though I agree with you on the romance and the Targ

Hey havent read it yet, though that is a good attitude to have, people have a strange aversion for AI

Awesome concept, hope you keep the interest in continuing the story

Awesome view on a more or less bad review, hope you keep going, but on my opinion you should be careful of drama for dramas sake, and for instance in this last chapters, although the plot as built ok’ish you had to people who were built as decent “warriors” face a situation where they had no options and made a tragic decision when at no point the storyline gives a prelude to it, and it did not “warn” the readers, from my perspective the story should aways accomplish the promise it gives or else readers feel a sence of disconnect, and the connection the mc has with the fox, although its already to late to change it seems to forced and not a view someone who lived for centuries would have, you should be careful to make the mc to emotional and not in control of his person. Good luck with the story!

It seems to be going the harem route though the lack of a system is a plus for me

Nice story, i had high hopes for it but unfortunately certain points made me drop it, for a 600 year old guy the mc sure doesn’t act like it, aside from that there is aways the bemoaning of making a mistake and repeating them after a few chapters, and the forced plot, his relationship with the fox although something i could let it pass became abnormal and the events it led to ( around chapter 40+-) makes it seems like forced plot for character development or story progression

Awesome story, i hope the misunderstanding stops at some point later on but anyway its a nice novel, hope you keep writing it or translating not sure witch

Honestly, feels like forced plot for mc development and to force the story in such way, shame

Hey a question, but is the FL the short girl? If it is a heads up would be nice, i tend to avoid stories with pedo tendencies