I am the author and I hope you enjoy it. We all will just have to wait for cuttlefish to start the second book. I hope this will tied you over until then, and hopeful spark better fanfiction to be written. After this gets longer I will add it to Space Battles forum

Nah I dont think you should add numbers every time you mention their rank. For one it will interfere with the flow of the story. I never read the breaker and rarly cultivation novels and I have no trouble with the rankings.

... Didn’t Ash’s mom not have Mr. Mime when he was younger? I seem to remember an episode about that.

I am giving his a 5 star rating because its writing quality is better than 95% of the storys on here, but be careful reading this because its a male soul choosing to become a female and the proptly continues crushing on Naruto. So, future reads be warned.

Ok... male romances Naruto is not what i want to see thanks

Well... As a man I would have not chosen to become a girl no matter what the other choices were, but I guess the author is different. I just hope it wont be weird with a romance or something to Naruto. Although, man soul hinata and sakura... it has possibilities.

I would vote you a powerstone for this chapter, but I used that up already today.

I wonder...

The author here. I am giving my own story a 5 star review. It is certainly better than some of the stories on webnovel with a 5 star rating.

Density compression into black hole!?!

That is not how nen works.

Yes being a Targrayen would help you much more, because everyone trusts them when they start saying crazy things and rush to put them in charge of every thing when they do so. They wont try to kill you even if you sound sane because no one trusts them anymore like the Starks. Everyone trusts the Targrayens and no ones trusts the Starks(Sarcasm)

Interesting However, you are wrong. He is not the heir to the iron throne, but the true king of westeros. Saying heir implyes next in line.

Made bad wishes. 1 should be the sword of rupture. 2 should be all powerful. no need for 3 already all powerful.

Wait a minute, Cedric was only 2 grades above harry. Same year as the weasley twins. He was just a little older than them so was able to put his name in the goblet of fire. You have him in fifth year when harry is in second

Yes, obviously putting your money in a muggle bank with an interest of 0.06% and an inflation of 5% or more, in fact pounds had an inflation of 9% in 1989, is most definitely the “smarter” decision. Much better than charging 3 galleons a month for as much money as you own with no inflation at all. I wonder why no one ever does this extremely “smart” decision. In fact, putting any more money in any banks than what is required for your bills is generally not a smart decision. The very most a bank will give you in interest is up to 2% and that requires special circumstances.

He picked wrong, the safest place he could have gone is Harry Potter he just has to avoid England for like 2-3years.

Hum why is Sasuke being emo? He was a happy kid that liked to show off before the Uchiha all got killed? Did you move up their death?

Sigh, anouther fan fiction that breaks canon with the olympics version of the chunin exams. No one ever seems to realize that the ninja world would not even be stable enough for that even excluding the fact that according to canon those exams were only ever held in Konoha by Konoha. The first non Konoha chunin exams where held in Suna after Garra became Kazekage.

Well I like that you are pLanning your new chapter out. However, I really wish you didnt post this info. Why? Because this whole thing is a spoiler. I read some of it to realize what it was and then skipped the whole thing becAuse I personally find spoilers to ruin books. Even the next chapTer or so will not be as fun because I read some of the spoiler. I hope you dont post spoilers in the future.