Hello friends👋 , it's my first time writing a book and English is not my first language so please ignore my little mistakes and please support this book📔
I really enjoy the book but it need stable updating and less pov of other than mc, it cause discontinuation of rhythm. Overall this has good potential.
Pretty good background and character design there I am very impressed with the quality and different aspects of the story. Some little things you have to take care and rest is fine I guess