ListlessDaoist

The Fool? 👁👁

Thought he’d be taller….

Sorry about the late chapter. This was originally supposed to come out tommorow, but I was revising this one multiple times after I had editied some content in the previous chapters.

Shameless Review | It’s been a year or so since I’ve written a story. So I’ve decided to train myself by writing this fan-fiction novel, though it’s also to become an outlet for all the cool ideas I’ve had on other anime, games, series, and etc. I didn’t want the typical; dies, meets god, and gets some wishes. So I decided to make the character gain the abilities of a Terraria character (Modded). Hopefully I can write this novel good and make y’all relieve your boredom.

So, my first chapter... Do any of you see any bad spelling, wording, or ways to improve the quality of this chapter? Thank Y’all!

540+ Million Dollars is Small? You’re above halfway into the bIllions... Hopefully, this novel is based on dollars and not actually a mis-translation of Yuan as Dollars.. I’ve also noticed that his ‘online friends’ can invest millions...??

It’s their own thoughts and ideas, I only hope it isn’t too nationalist later on. Usually most novels stop comparing countries and etc. after chapter 100 or less. I havent seen this to be doing it constantly, so I just Ignore the clueless arrogance.

I understand, and I agree that in some parts that it is indeed not too great. But, this is the 60th, and it presents an interesting idea I very much enjoy. I’d like for this to be more explored/translated, see what they do with the idea. For Uniqueness...I haven’t really seen any other novel with the same concept besides Black Iron, if you have any..please feel free to tell me. Kinda been getting bored of all the pet based novels, and the other stuff.

I Want This to Be Acceped. This is very interesting, and has a very unique system in that it ain’t omnipotent but simply very useful for the main character.

How many are in the school itself though? Is it the only school?