The last couple chapters have been amazing especially the fights keep up the great work

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I would say the affinity and approval parts make things feel like a game which is fine if that’s What you are going for but I personally feel it would be better without it and maybe the dice part to. It’s your story do you what you want. This is just my opinion

Cool btw I do think the fic will be better if you ditch some of game elements. Keep up the great work

Do you plan on having other jjk characters in this story

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Great chapter i feel Ron going to keep same mistake he did with Amelia

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Good chapter I wonder when he is going to tell his family about Amelia

Hope he learns from this I guess

Good chapter

Good chapter can’t wait to next one

If he knew it was lobo why wait to transform?

When he gets back and raven move on

Him passing out a lot is starting to get annoying good chapter though.

Good Chapter Please don’t let the mc tell everybody about the system and dungeons

Mc when he see ivo

Good chapter

Good chapter