mcforever

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mcforever4 years ago
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The grammer is terrible in this one... I suggest you use grammerly.
In his past life, It was true that he had a rough start. Surviving the catastrophe, being enslaved by a witch, used as a genie pig by a dragon king, and even being tortured for years by the elves who wanted to get information about that dragon king!
My Enchanting System
Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
mcforever4 years ago
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The guy is blatantly stealing from dnd lol. tier 3 = 3rd-circle. Even the same spell names. Not that I mind, yeah?
"Fireball, The most famous and Infamous spell of all time! Being just a third-tier spell makes it available for any competent mage! Wide AOE as well decent damage!" Cain said out loud.
My Enchanting System
Fantasy · Alen_Tanor
mcforever6 years ago
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welp at least now he looks passable. Seen men who looked 5 scoring a 9, so a 6 can still score a 7.
[Looks: 2->6 - From monster to mediocre]
My Pick Up Artist System
Urban · SamsaraWithWords