Pretty good, albeit generic story; however please, please, please do some basic editing on your chapters even if it's using a basic text processor to fix capital letters, spacing, etc. It would vastly improve the reading quality without even needing to change anything major or put too much effort into.

It's a decent story. It's like fast food, if you go in and try not to think about it too much it's an enjoyable experience, but if you expect the next best thing to from here then you might be dissapponted.

Love the story. 5/5. One small nitpick: As an avid SCP article reader this SCP Foundation version does seem very lax with it's safety procedures, though I guess it's necessary for plot development.