watch him make some sort of blood contract or some bs

U don't think we're reading the same book if you think the grammar is pperfect. it is borderline unreadable in the chapters I've managed to make it through

I'm already almost completely done with this train wreck. please tell me it gets better?!

proper grammar includes punctuation and capitalizing the first word in sentences. it is never appropriate to abbreviate words like though in writing.

A.I. don't forget the second period. also, the correct order of a sentence is opinion-size-age-shape-colour-origin-material-purpose noun, so it would be, "long white beard"

Holy run on sentences batman

"I mean whatnot" and "I mean" are never acceptable to include in any sentences unless it is dialog or inner thoughts. also, it is usually always best to write in past tense- "I saw," "I thought," "he said."

This is so rough, it's like it wasn't edited at all. I don't generally complain about small grammar mistakes, but the enormity of the total adds up to nearly unreadable chapters. you need to hire an editor and re-upload all these chapters

swords are sooo basic and take years and years to gain any semblance of skill with them. a bo staff, however, has many uses, can be picked up and used easily, and competence can be trained much more quickly, also there can be blades added on the end to make a pole arm weapon if you want to cut things

Dude, you need to edit and re-upload all of the chapters I've read so far! this novel doesn't deserve any support until such time as the edit is completed

dejected is not a verb. you can't deject something.

Please tell me the writing quality has gone up, or at least has enlisted the aid of an editor? I don't know if I can stand much more of this

this mfer writes dialog to sound like a cross between Christopher Walken and captain kirk smdh

I don't think so. it's not in my library any longer, so I think I quit reading after a couple dozen chapters.

JDX is wholly not to be trusted, regardless of how believable it mat be. And, the author does like weaving webs of theories and half truths, so I think ZW is just the backup plan in case none of the others worked.

This is the only way. Either you kill me, or be afraid for your life every day until you get your payback

I hold grudges too strongly to be an Mc in a book like this. Every single guard and instructor that whipped me or beat me would die by my hands when I left.

It's been over a year, and the author still hasn't gotten an editor to go over this novel. The fact that WN is pushing this forward as one to read, while allowing the poor writing quality just shows that WN and QI are only after your money.

if you ever see a square citrus, you could probably be the luckiest person on earth. or in minecraft.

It's like those sections in Zelda with the cursed forest when you go through the same spot in a loop..yeah. thats what it is!