Patricia_Chong_Goh

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

A nice story overall and I love that it’s a short one. The only down side is frequent, and I mean frequent, name and gender errors.

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Thank you very much, I enjoyed the story. Loved the character and story development and its pace, loved loved its length - just over 500 chapters

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

We’ve reached the end?!

I love stories of this genre. I had picked this book up before but put it down again. Reading again this time, I realised why. It’s because the translation is so poor. The he/she, the missing word. Some may think it’s not a big deal but it is. Some sentences make no sense because it’s missing a word. All these take the pleasure out of reading. I’m giving up on this story.