BookWorm69
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I'm having a hard time continuing this novel as it no longer makes sense, she has 3000 fragments which is way beyond her supposed saturation point which is supposed to be 1000 until she leaves, that was the whole point why being stuck in the forgotten shore was so bad for them, because they can't grow stronger once they reach that saturation point which is the same for everyone. so she shouldn't be able to grow stronger and she shouodnt have even gotten past a 1000 to begin with. I hate the fact that he's now nothing more than a dog and the author made it that way...
fate is just an excuse for authors to repeatedly create unlikely or impossible scenarios. later it is revealed just hoe big this place is, so much so that it is basically impossible to meet anyone unless it's close to ot at the place they are all heading.
please don't spoil. I didn't know her name
yeah but it probably has tunnels since the coral isn't just a maze like we humans build, ours is just walls but these are coral reefs with holes connecting some and alot of dead ends
yea but any person with a hint of intelligence would be able to realise that it wouldn't come until it turns dark by connecting the fact that it only started dissapearing exactly when the sun rose. for a guy that is supposed to be smart like that time he thought of using gravity to defeat an unbeatable monster he cannot figure out the oceans relation to the sun. some authors make these mistakes with characters where they seem intelligence when the plot needs it but are dumb otherwise, it also contradicts his character so far.
no way he can see that far. even a hundred meters is a stretch to say the least, but hundreds as in many hundred is impossible for him unless he can see in pitch black night and has a vision that is lik e a telescope or a special ability. but so far his whole body is that of a human, his vision is no different from any regular human at the moment.
then his growth shouldnt be stagnant, he now has enough nutrients that his halted growth should skyrocket henceforth. please don't make the mc into a midget.
it would be a dumb risk for the author, because the moment he gets a master is the moment most of the readers quit, even if the relationship gets abolished later, nobody would want to bother reading further with a real slave mc who can't even resist, its different to read a novel where mc is a slave but he can choose to lie and disobey but if he can't then it's boring and annoying as fuck to read.
I'm guessing that someone will speak his true name but it won't do anything because it needs to be said in the runic language to work.
same, I don't want him to ever expose his true name or be made a true slave.. I've seen many good novels sink into garbage due to stupid things like that. not specifically the slave part, but rather the mc suddenly turning in to a simp or his character turns 180 into something he isn't.
cringe
knew it, these people have no personality, they only exist to suck up to other people in the background...
why make everyone so dumb, she definitely used foresight or some ability similar to that otherwise she wouldn't have been able to react like that period. almost everyone reading this comes to that conclusion so why is it that the people in this novel are so bland and dumb, they don't feel like real people with their own thoughts and opinion, everything they do and say is just to either aggrivate mc or suck up to someone.
honestly it's dumb that there isn't a limit to that, the system needs some kind of limit, like taking too much off it that wasn't killed by yourself will pose negative effects instead of just continuesly levelling a person up.
the only real problem I have with this novel is the fact that his aspect is really weak for something divine at the moment, he should atleast be able to blend or hide in the shadows or move through them to another location... unless the divine is just the potential and every rank is meaningless since humans have never even reached beyond saint. it just feels off when everyone has an attribute like 4-5 levels lower and yet they start off far stronger than his so called divine attribute.. I hope the author atleast balances it so that those have a limit. such as nobody being able to reach levels higher than their attributes/affinity potential, for its level is that persons final limit that they cannot break away from. that would atleast make the mc unique since he would have the potential to reach divinity.
authors always fail to make people in their novels lifelike, even I and another person instantly came to the conclusion that she possesses some prediction ability, could also be time related. so honestly the whole school should know after this from rumors.
it's all over the place, everywhere. if you know what I mean...
they can inside their dreams like he did before, but it wasn't really a dream but more like a skipping the night
aladeen for yes and no