imeldaflavia
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a night owl / bookworm
2018-11-15 JoinedIndonesia
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imeldaflavia9mthCommentedCh 17 Water Delivery- imeldaflavia10mthCommentedCh 666 Ceremony (2)
- imeldaflavia1yrCommentedCh 134 Youâre Mine Too
- imeldaflavia1yrCommented
4 '!' in this paragraf
Just as how Jiang Tong had understood Old Ghost, if one wanted to talk to Old Ghost, they had to beat him. He was very persistent with the knife. Those who could defeat him with a knife would become a special existence in his heart. Just from the perspective of cold weapon combat, Old Ghost would think that the other party was powerful and invincible! This was the mentality that an extremely confident person would have after being defeated! He would think that if he couldn't win, who else could? And Jiang Tong had not only defeated him, but seven people, including him! They fought together! - imeldaflavia1yrCommented
in this paragraf alone, I found 5 sentences end with '!'. you overused it
The silent Old Ghost didn't touch the gun. Jiang Tong's words were very clear. Although he was suspicious, he believed that he had a chance to kill Jiang Tong directly. However, he did not understand. He did not immediately realize that this was an instinctive fear of Jiang Tong! The car accident plan to deal with Jiang Tong had been a sudden decision, but it had failed! Everyone had been captured! In the elevator, the seven of them attempted to kill her, but Jiang Tong won. After escaping from the hospital for more than an hour, Jiang Tong appeared as soon as he reached the safe house. Jiang Tong even dared to give him a gun! Old Ghost was very confident in his ability to fight in close combat. He was indeed confident in his ability, but Jiang Tong had overturned his understanding. From that moment on, his understanding of Jiang Tong had been raised to an unimaginable level! And he was very impressed! - imeldaflavia1yrCommented
i'm lost. 7kg or 7 pounds?
"The child is very healthy and well-developed in all aspects. She's 52 centimeters tall and weighs 7.4 kilograms." - imeldaflavia2yrCommentedCh 147 Ye Lulu Hugged Guan Chibei from the Back