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The book quite literally broke its rules in the first ten chapters. The main character is suppo to be a slave of an organization and have a collar that detects the items they coll from killing enemies yet when he kills a bunch of bosses and gets a lot of loot the collar detects nothing

Bruh isn’t all his items detected by his collar

The protagonist doesn’t have a system its like an infinite flow where he is trying to surv ive because he has a death flag on him. he transmigrates each time he dies and tries to live longer each time

The story just feels off. it feels like a three year old tried to write a cultivation novel and badly failed. The first problem with the novel wouldnbe the writing style which ruins the novel with the lack of world building and logic. we don’t have an understanding of the world’s cultivation and are just asked to understand everything about the novel without any background or context to why

Yeah what about all the horrible emperors out there explain king Zhou and also the French Revol ution

Bruh this makes no sense

Dude can’t the government track you down seeing the abnormal amount of money you’re spending

Sigh bs as usual

So basically BS

Dude they forgot he’s a minor he can’t work at that age thiug