akaiYuki
I'm Just Simply Me 😘
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I enjoyed this book of yours. I don't want to sound rude about your work, since I do love your story. The story needs more improvement, as to the previous chapter it kinda got boring because of the monotonous things the MC has been doing. This is just my suggestion, but I think it'll be good to start introducing new characters that the MC could rely and not just people of whom he controls with power. The story is being all centered with MC and his Idle Gaming System that the story is being fast paced. I do hope to read more about this story though, since it's interesting and I like it. Keep up the good work. I'll try my best to support your works. 😘