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mosaicc1yrCommentedI originally wanted to write a Jedi SI Avengers fic, but the problems of the MCU are too easy for a Jedi to handle. So things escalated from there over and over. The first chapter can be skipped completely without much of a problem. It is the guideline for character creation in the story. If you do read it, feel free to get some dice, roll a character using the guidelines, and see if a character like yours appears later. The character building took inspiration from Jump Chain fics but has my own personal interpretation.- mosaicc1yrCommented
This class combination doesn’t make sense though, a guardian that’s a berserker as well?
You have chosen your second class: Berserker - mosaicc1yrCommented
It should be ‘his experience in life’, his school days were so far in the past at this point, referring to it here makes it seem as if the souls bonded was a young Tom and not the man he grew to be.
Harry still was not used to people just being nice to him without expecting something in return. His experience in Slytherin taught him that. But the Hufflepuffs seem different. - mosaicc1yrCommented
Might be a bit late to point this out but thunder is sound, lightning is electricity so yh
The original price for the elements was three hundred thousand points but after getting the thunder element alex didn't realize that the price doubled. this stung to see as it meant he was going to struggle with gathering enough points to have both elements not to mention have them be useable by the time the fifth fleet arrived. this meant he needed to scrap the all element plan for now and pick a different direction to grow in. this lead to him having a headache at how many choices he had in total. - mosaicc1yrCommented
Aah a Chinese fanfic, explains things
"Konohagakure, for a village claiming to be the best in the world, it's surprisingly easy to get in. The people here are not prepared at all." Jì wù sat at the table near the doorway, he was relaxed and feeling contempt towards Konoha. - mosaicc1yrCommented
In a world like Naruto knowledge is power so to have a ninjutsu shop makes no sense 😅 they will horde the knowledge only giving it to who they want.
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- mosaicc1yrCommentedWell, generally speaking, people like Fugaku were an exception.
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When you think about it, it sounds corny af when said irl 😂 do people still say that?
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Revenge is the correct term in this scenario
"Those bastards... I have to avenge them!" - mosaicc1yrReplied to Joe_momma
Don’t do this. Keep it as is. No good reason to as it can add too the story down the line of him discovering what he has.
1 gram of every known metal,ore and minerals in host current universe - mosaicc1yrCommented
She doesn’t understand the thrill of it all
She always found that act so— barbaric— and disgusting whenever she saw it. - mosaicc1yrCommented
You should read Existence, it’s a good manga
I'm taking inspiration from a manga from my past life... Terraformars. There are many OP animals on Earth, If I can use them to the fullest... I will have many, many new abilities. - mosaicc1yrCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
- mosaicc1yrCommentedCh 16 Chapter 16: One-Star Dou Grandmaster
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Timeskip to the rescue
Had a bit of writer block lately so the chapters are coming to me slow - mosaicc1yrCommented
No he doesn’t… according to the character you described so far.
"You certainly have a lot of willpower…".