For what it's worth I haven't removed it from my library. I just haven't read much either since like chapter 300 or so ish since I was rubbed the wrong way on this story and needed a break but again it wasn't enough to make me wanna drop it at the time. If memory serves me correctly the authors other story Van Helsing System, or whatever it was titled( I took a break on that too, not because of being bummed but that I had caught up and wanted to leave room to be able to binge read a bunch) I can't remember the exact name, was a clear example of an author improving all around.

This is pretty solid of a story. I do have some complaints as they just drive me insane. This author and or translator use galaxy and universe as if they mean the same thing. It is honestly infuriating. I can happily let it go if it was one or hell... a dozen times or whatever... but with how frequently they use them as if they mean the same EXACT thing is driving me nuts. Like they say blank is the strongest in the universe when clearly talking about the galaxy just to give an idea. The other thing that really bothers me is they frequently employ the strategy of saying very little with very many words. Now if it felt natural I'd be happy but it really doesn't feel like it suits this story in the slightest. All in all it is worth a read if you can get past the things I mentioned.

If you want quality smut... You're in the wrong place as this story is lacking. If you want quality story... once again you are in the wrong place as this story is very lacking. Final Score 1.8/5. More details or complaints below. Writing Quality: The author has a bad habit of using the wrong words or just fails to properly do a good job describing things and falls back on something like. " she's hot" when describing someone. If it was once or twice I could probably just ignore it and let it go but this stuff is repeated way too often. So 2/5 here. Update stability seems solid or decent so I'm throwing 4/5 here Story Development: I don't even know where to begin... the author likes to do a ton of dumb things to force plot to go one way or the other to name just one thing out of.... well the entire story basically. An example is this. For training Lith has to be tortured. Gets flayed and the like. Bones crushed. Later the author makes the MC Lith say " without pain I won't understand joy" or some nonsense. Like I get the idea and may not entirely disagree BUT the real issue is... Torture? What are they training. Pain tolerance? There are less stupid ways to go about this while also ensuring just as good results... and it seems like pain tolerance was almost the entire reason for that. It is so stupid... There is this other vampire related story I read that at least had a reason behind torture beyond just the pain tolerance and it was because in that story a vampire's regenerative abilities increase the more you need to make use of them or some such. I can get behind that kind of reasoning for torture. In this story it feels like the author just likes to throw things in because they are edgy and they think it is cool or something... 1/5 Character Design: I can get on board with incest. I can get on board with isekai. I can get on board with a world full of isekai. What I can't get on board with is when you make characters and say they're this. Oh wait I mean this. No I mean this instead. Wait what were they again? Like seriously... this is so annoying. For example. You make a character that was a Lawyer in their past life. Then for almost no reason they go full Serial Killer mass murderer mode. For "justice" you say. Such weak writing man... 1/5 World Background: There basically isn't any beyond a brief description of the various areas. 1/5

I have many many complaints and dislikes about this novel BUT I gotta say... the author literally explained that the Mother CAN read minds and do what you said.... but chooses NOT to do so with her children. Why? Because they are her babies and she doesn't want to.

Is there a point where we finally move on from being a Shura's Wrath clone of sorts? Just asking because I've already completed that story and don't really want to read it again at the moment...

This is a story rated higher than it deserves. To start you should be aware that the MC is ( at least where I stopped which was ...50 ish... give or take a few chapters) 13. Like 17 in his past life. Yet somehow has the mental ability of like a 7 year old. He's remarkably not bright. The author has plenty of ideas they think are creative and try to run with them but sadly the author seems to lack the writing ability to back them up. The biggest issue I have honestly is the way the MC talks and interacts with anyone else. It felt terribly off.

I would not advise wasting time on this story. The writing is sub-par at best. I'm not even going to try going into detail on what exactly is wrong since, unfortunately, there is too much. The descriptors for various(most) scenes aren't particularly good. The conversations are poor etc... etc... etc... I went into this with low expectations and wanting to like this and despite the low expectations it still managed to let me down.

The story I think would be a 3 star rating if it weren't for how bad the translation of Endless Fantasy Translations or whatever they are called. If I was the author I would be genuinely furious with them for how piss poor a job they've done. I haven't gotten to what I assume is the current translator... I really hope they aren't as bad or worse... IF they are as bad or worse I think this will be one of the few stories I tell people to actually avoid reading because bad translation is a major story killer in my eyes.

I gave this a shot but this is rough. Firstly this story really feels like it's lacking a certain focus. Like parts of it just really feel... all over the place. Mainly regarding the MC. It's as if the author can't decide on exactly how to make the character. Secondly the intelligence of the MC is really... REALLY lacking... like really annoyingly so. Finally... actually I'm just leaving it here. I'm too tired to complain any further.

"smart"

This guy is instantly coming across like some dude from r/niceguy or whatever that reddit is. That or one of the actual nut jobs from 4chan. And this is like their first interaction with someone outside the internet or what have you... First he gets close encounter with an enemy when he has guns... secondly he then " mercy kills" said guy... after fighting him for... what reason exactly? I mean he made it pretty clear he intended to kill. But he wants to play with his food I guess? Some mercy he has. Thirdly he can't seem to wrap his mind around the fact this girl was just beating and about to be gang graped and that "could" be traumatic to some... I really hope this story improves... This is all sorts of disjointed writing so far...

I was looking at reviews to get an idea of what story to try out and stumbled across this section of this review on this story. I only want to discuss one single aspect of what you've said. It's regarding the Balanced OP part. I must say I disagree with you a great deal. You cannot be OP and have Balance included too much. Let me explain my thought process somewhat briefly. I'll use like... something generic like video game levels as an example. Let's say you're level 1. You are fighting other level one things. Be they monsters or players or whatever you want. Nothing in this level is really a threat to you. You can defeat any and all in this level with ease. Level 2 you can still do so but it's slightly tougher. Then level 3 and then 4 and finally you make it to level 5 enemies while you're still just level 1. You can fight them but it's a tough battle. If you're not careful they can take you down fairly quickly... BUT! you can still take them down! A hard fought and well earned victory! This is not OP this is just strong. We don't need to dive into this too much because I know there are plenty of games that allow even more absurd level 1 players to fight real tough things. I'm just trying to be broad and general. My point is that OP is when you are level 100 and wander into a level 1 community and just wreak havoc. OP and Balance don't go together as OP is all about breaking that Balance. When you Balance something out you are REMOVING the OP from the topic and replacing it with strong or what have you. Now with all that said I do agree some Balance must be placed on a character to some degree otherwise the story quickly becomes incredibly boring. "The Mc looked at this enemy and they died!" "they looked at this enemy and they also died" "they looked at yet another and they too died!" I mean really that becomes so boring so quickly. It just seems like from the context of the many reviews I've read and seeing this one itself that it feels like you missed the mark a bit and took something from OP to Strong( which is ok, Strong characters are fun and enjoyable) and yet are still convinced that the MC is still categorized as OP. All-in-all this is just coming from someone bored looking for something to read and decided to argue semantics. Feel free to ignore.

Oh wow, I'm so surprised...

Overconfidence is a slow and insidious killer...

If you like a story of Forced plot and awful plot armor ( not to be confused with plot armor that can actually be fun ) then this may be to your tastes. Also I don't know what is up with this author but some of the absolute dumbest " genius mc's " I've read have been in these stories... I think I'm just done with anything coming from this author. It felt like for a time early on they were aiming to improve and then based on a ton of positive comments decided that it was enough and didn't want to improve more. Sadly they stopped improving too early in my taste. I don't enjoy " genius mc's " in stories when they are at best average intelligence in reality and just happen to have been thrown into a world with an average intelligence of a fricken rock.

This story started out okay. Then seemed like it could possibly improve. However after the 900's area of the story it is painfully clear there will be no improvement. At around the 900 area the story takes a direct nosedive off a cliff in terms of writing quality and/or story development. Also I have to say this has got to be one of the single Dumbest " Genius" MC's I've ever read about. I can see potential in the authors writing and yet it just seems this potential is thrown away into the trash at every opportunity presented... It's quite a let down.

Continued: But I'm pretty sure that's not happening

I am genuinely confused on how this has such a high rating. I looked through other reviews and saw people praising this to no end. So well planned and all that. And all I can think of is that.... I'm not some brilliant guy. I'm no genius. At best I'm above average a bit lol... And yet I've seen several cases throughout what I've read and they just jerk me from the flow of reading this story... If it happened rarely I could deal with it but with this happening every other chapter it's genuinely annoying. Long story short: Based on the synopsis I thought it had potential. Based on the rating I thought it had potential still. Based on the amount of chapters I again thought it had potential. 70 chapters in and I came to the realization this is a waste of my time. From what I see the author just continues to drop the ball. Maybe it gets better... Idk... where I am currently in the story I'm just annoyed. Based on spoilers I've read from others... I feel as if I'll just continue to be annoyed rather than see any actual worthy change from the author.

I picture this loosely...

I think it is called inuyashiki.