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Just to be clear, my reaction was due to shopping, and I hate shopping, even for myself.
First of all, thank you for the positive review, even if you didn't particularly enjoy the plot. Secondly, I understand what you mean. Honestly, it felt a bit forced to put all that drama into a TLM fanfic, but it's the kind of plot I like, so I kind of let myself go with it. It was the first serious book I wrote, and I was more focused on making something more to my liking. Of course, I understand you wanting to stop. I already know where readers stop in this fanfic, most of the time it's because of the drama. That's why, from volume 2 onwards, there was practically no drama. I focused much more on the galactic adventure. I thought it was better to do that, although the drama itself won't completely disappear, it's unlikely to reach what the first volume did. I'd say you'll like volume 2 much more because of that, but it might be a struggle for you to get there, so I won't try to convince you to stay. Anyway... thank you for giving the story a chance anyway.
He ages normally within the Adventure, but when he returns, he reverts to the age he was when he started the Adventure.
He's going to Hogwarts, he'll be a wizard, although the Adventures are important, my goal is to change the world of HP through them, that's why the protagonist won't return to those adventure worlds after leaving, at least not before I finish the story. It's quite possible that I'll leave a way for him to travel back through the worlds he's already been to, but that will only be mentioned in an epilogue.
squeamish, I guess. It's difficult to find a word in English to express what I wanted to say.
Not in this fanfic.
They are not curses.
what?
vlw bro