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Poor Shuri, she never did end up relevant.

Is giving out interesting and unique threats how we're meant to get more chapters? What about threatening to mail you two hundred copies of the tale of Darth Plagueis the Wise but I swap the font to something slightly different almost every time. Let the uncertainty of if it is indeed the same font gnaw at your mind.

Well written story with amazing background detail. The characters are still getting fleshed out and I like most of them, but they do feel exceptionally "real" from what little we have seen of them. Updates have been consistent so far and the author has a good track record with updates, especially when you include their other stories. So far, the opening grips you in just a few chapters. Even just reading the first five should get you hooked if the premise is at all interesting to you. I'd highly recommend giving it a shot!

It's a really solidly constructed naruto fic. The Chaos Gacha adds some spice but the MC isn't an idiot about it. Take what works, discard the rest... unless it's really, really strong (which we haven't seen yet but will still be interesting). I highly recommend this to anyone with even a passing familiarity with Naruto, or just someone looking for an interesting story with a lot of interesting training stuff so far. P.S Why do I need to rate the world background? HOW do I properly rate the world background for a fanfic?

Yeah the way they managed to get blood from both Tony and Melissa feels like a serious case of idiot ball. It also introduces a heck of a lot of consequences into the story that has so far been relatively free of them. There are plenty of ways for the villians in this story to get stronger but that felt really cheap. But, to not be too negative let's talk about some of my favourite parts. I really enjoyed the AFO fight with the Iron Might scenes. That was excellent and I also enjoyed Melissa and Tony just being together that's always great.

So, I'm reading this long after the fact and perhaps because it doesn't matter I feel like adding... that I'm not super in love with how this played out. He lost his arm, spent 6 months recovering, then the first thing he does is get his arm back. Don't get me wrong, I love how you sorted that issue out and if this had come 20 chapters or more down the line I would be super on board but as it stands it feels like all that talk about getting a new arm and designing it was a waste. Granted, I suspect this happened because of all the complaints so I'm not annoyed about it.

I'm a big fan of how the Horcux didn't so much merge with Lily as it did twist and pervert her thought process. On a technical level, nothing has changed. Her top priority is still Harry. However, with the new "perspective" the definition of "protect" has widened a lot and includes some questionable things

Well considering Kat is still exploring what her sexuality means even as of the most recent chapters (989) I think that's a bit unfair to say. Plus, it IS marked as gay. There is a very clear Yuri tag on the story.

This is an amazing idea. Don't be afraid to keep doing stuff like this.

Spoilers. It does change.