Dis some good shit right here

This is basically a shittier and more watered-down version of Release that Witch, it's actually crazy how we went from a super Magical cool world to a Modern bland gun world

This Novel is Amazing, It even got me shedding tears and just for that it gets a full 5 from me, Keep up the work

This would have been a masterpiece if it weren't for some of the rapey elements that happen throughout the story, so it's not for persons who don't like such aspects.

The book is alright not too good not too bad, the only downside to it is that it is very cliched, I could predict the plot in mere seconds, from the moment that lily had the ice element I knew that some woman only ice sect would notice her talent and force her to join them and make it difficult for the main character to even see her again, and I very much despise these kinds of plots but on the other hand, everything is well executed though the R18 chapters hold more to be desired in both detail and length.

White hair, black bow and can dual-weild What is this dude Shirou Emiya?

This is honestly my first review on this site, and I have to say that this novel deserves it, simply because of the fact that this was such an awesome and pleasant novel to read, my only regret is the that I Burnt through these chapters like a drug addict on his second roll of weed, and If I were to describe what this novel is it would be the equivalent of what KonoSuba is to the Isekai genre, and what this novel is to the rest of the Chinese trash transmigration novels. Keep up the good work Mr. author, as it would be a shame of such a gem like this were to be dropped or abandoned.