Current rating as of this chapter: 3.9/5. I'm not a grammar freak or anything of the sort but there are just a slight to many mistakes where the sentence doesn't make sense other then that you've done a great job with the story and it's development and the fixing of the system mistakes really boosted my rating. Can't wait for more to come out.

IT'S BEEN AWHILE SINCE I'VE HAD A GOOD BRAWL

After reading what is currently out if I had to give this a rating it would be at most a 3.5/5 and here's why. The main reason is the stat issue I mentioned in a previous chapter for a system novel accuracy there is important. The next biggest reason would be the inconsistency, how did James have a gun when his was supposedly cut in half? How could it be night when just in the next paragraph it's the afternoon (Jocelyns adventure)? How do high profile criminals (Alexia and her crew) get locked up in what is basically described as a county jail? Especially when it has federal agents involved in the crime that are under investigation. Also how did the escape so easily they'd have to walk past several officers to get to the lower floor to get a vehicle and there would be a check there to for security purposes. Last and definitely the least of the issue is the grammatical errors and the sentences that just don't make sense sometimes. I am not too worried about this part because even though it is an issue it's not something that makes or breaks the story. I do enjoy this story and love the potential it has so I hope you take this as constructive criticism and not hate.

Constructive criticism here. Follow up with what you write. Hp was increased by 30 due to his level up (at level 2) so now that he leveled up 11 more times his Hp should have increased by 330 points. Stat points are incorrect to since you've implied that he gets ten a level up (90 at level 9) so he should be at 130 for stat points. and the number of zombies he has is ever changing it when you give an exact number consistency and proper math will be key when involving numbers like this. Otherwise good story

Isn't he disguised right now as not Rex? What conditions is he talking about then if so since the current him didn't give them any conditions.

This is probably for future plot but this is really uncharacteristic of an Alpha any wolf that runs away from a hunt is kicked out of the pack unless the Alpha says for everyone to retreat. Alphas mentality is to protect their pack not have the pack protect them so you'd be more likely to see an Alpha sacrifice himself for the pack then vice versa but then there is also the packs loyalty so you'd usually see a fight to the death then the pack abandoning their Alpha

Only issue is that canines are known for there heightened sense of smell which they rely on more the sight when searching for prey especially wolves so that reasoning is flawed unless the spell masks scent as well the grouping up to protect the leader is also wrong since as you stated before the hierarchy is based on strength and irl wolf packs don't protect their leader specifically the warriors and the alpha fight together. The alpha ordering his pack to surround Aiden would be more correct then anything else since that's the most common tactic that wolves use to hunt/fight

I'll reiterate my previous comment when he's holding back to keep his power level in check it shouldn't affect his stats that drastically at least his physical ones. Let's say a bodybuilder decides to hold back and lift something lighter then his usual he isn't going to lose his original strength. Obviously fighting is different but it's a similar concept yes he's holding back which means he can't utilize his stats completely but they are still there and they don't become pitiful. Also how is he having a hard time keeping track of people when he has enhanced senses and is a martial artist unless his family didn't train reaction speed and reflexes he shouldn't be struggling especially since he got a significant boost to his senses that includes how fast the eye can track. Otherwise great chapter and great story so far keep up the good work.

If Int raises the energy capacity of someone then how does someone with 60 Int have the same capacity as the previous guy who I believe had 16 Int?