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Rydle1yrCommentedCh 60 Targeted by a Tier 4 Phantom Tail- Rydle1yrCommented
Welcome to Philly
Because there was a limit to what he could spend on his living expenses, Lu Yuan's home was located in the slums. Since that was the case, the public security here wasn't that good and gunfights would happen occasionally. - Rydle1yrCommented
Memoir Beckoner? Is that the right ability? I thought that was Strongest's.
It could also be said that Hazen's powers influenced Lore, as this was from the Cultivation World, and with him taking the reins during the revival. Due to that, the power of Memoir Beckoner influenced all the other three in mysterious ways. - Rydle2yrCommentedCh 333 The Main Character
- Rydle2yrCommentedCh 59 Flame Refinery
- Rydle2yrCommentedCh 54 Chaotically Complex
- Rydle2yrCommentedCh 41 Edible Banana and Drinkable Water
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Compass makes 20/hr and a drink cost 20-40 depending on fruit juice.
"So, if any animals are indeed mutating, the signs would be more prone in the rural area." He concluded, opening up the nearby drawer to take out his passbook, looking at the balance, "I have 76,850 Paise. This is all that remains of what mom and dad saved." - Rydle2yrCommented
I'm whaling for Psychic Parasite. This hits deep.
"Tell that idiot behind you to write my story faster. My patience is waning thin." - Rydle2yrReplied to Overlord_Venus
Author broke the fourth wall from the outside of a different story where the fourth wall doesn't exist.
"Tell that idiot behind you to write my story faster. My patience is waning thin." - Rydle2yrCommented
Good paragraph right here.
A sleek, elegant face that was capable of pulsing the hearts of even men, handsomeness at the peak of masculinity, but suffused with a semblance of grace that gave him a dignified air. With the darkness of the night painted in the background, adding onto his mysterious words, Compass Carburettor appeared…handsomely terrifying! - Rydle2yrCommentedCh 14 Cape of Good Hope
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Now with 50% less fat.
With the extra Slim Mucus, the Midnight Pheasant Eyes, and his sword, Elliot brewed the Essence. He took out the Green River Pebble and crafted the Weapon Gem. - Rydle3yrReplied to Overlord_Venus
I think a good way to be more aware of it would be to not have dialogues with the reader. It removes the reader from the scene of Jyorta constructing and puts them in a headspace of reading a Wikipedia article. I'm not sure if it is meant to be Jyorta's inner monologue but I don't think he would having an internal lecture of something like this during the construction of his subsouls. I still like things like these but they do ruin the immersion. Consider keeping away from 'suppose' and 'a simple example'. Thank you for the hard work.
Suppose a person hears a certain—whether familiar or unfamiliar—word, the brain would process the information and link it to different memories. This enables the person to recall related information or trigger a method to derive an answer. - Rydle3yrCommented
Pun intended?
'So, my first choice of action was the correct one.' Jyorta left a self-deprecating laugh, "Leave it to physics to screw us from time to time." - Rydle3yrCommented
This paragraph uses masculine pronouns for Herellia.
"It takes me five minutes to recover from a state of uselessness to a state where I could barely defend myself," Herellia muttered to himself, thinking that it would take quite a bit more time for her to return to her peak condition. Nevertheless, she did not waste the time that Horell bought for her, deciding to head towards the crimson magic circle she had conjured to increase the amount of time Horell could buy for him. - Rydle3yrReplied to Ungamer
Then go the PH route of calling her stepsister.
"Yes, sister." Jyorta nodded, picking up the gown, feeling its coarse fabric, looking numerous times inferior to the ones he wore daily. He then stared at the nurse, gazing at her watching him. The two looked at each other, the atmosphere turning awkward, making him feel embarrassed. - Rydle3yrReplied to Ficqy
teenage negasonic warhead
In the twelfth seconds, Kai suddenly spat blood and fell to the ground lifelessly. He died.