Shade1019
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Timeline seems a bit off. You say that they are gradually earning more day by day and have been around long enough for them to even be seen as a couple. 2 Days isn't really gonna do this. Also he was injured and woke the next day, a day to come up with the idea and then he staked out a place to set up shop. Think this would be more like a week or even 2 weeks would sound better cause of how their business has grown and others have started setting up with them.
Her
? Thought his skill focused on an aspect and he was searching for infected at the time?
Line before this says 50 seconds the you say 30 minutes?
Where does Franklin come from?
Hanks
Where does it say he slapped him?
Says 40000 just a few paragraphs earlier.
Ah yea… the 360 degree turn around.
He even waited til he was level six to open the dungeon.
Camille
Don’t think this is the new dungeon. This is the one that they said they couldn’t clear before.
Scot free
Terran
He’s asleep
Six armed Golem.
Thought it was 500 for the shelter and 100 for the defense.
Her brother
Foes
Probably better just to say gun shots. Shoot wouldn’t be right here.