But you're reviewing the novel itself, and now the decision from the corporate side of Webnovel to do this. You gave this novel such a low rating, and it affects the overall rating when new readers consider giving it a shot. The translator has no power over which chapters begin to charge for a fee, and neither does the original author.

Riveting story, along with the characters as well. Every chapter builds up the tension well, and you can't help but wonder what will happen next.

I don't think you should put such a low rating just because the company Webnovel decided to start charging from that chapter. Clearly everyone who has been reading deeper into the novel seems to be enjoying the development. Giving such a low rating only affects the original author and official translator negatively. This is an issue you need to take up with the company, and not bring down the rating of a well-received novel.

It's not over yet ;) there are side stories as well!