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Water attribute douqi in the btth fanfic???? The author’s head must have kicked by a donkey when he was writing this fanfic
I think it’s a mistake on translator’s part, cause in the machine translation i’ve read the skill Xiao ze used was also advance xuan level, but here the translator wrote it as a advanced earth level
Sometime you show he is carefree and sometime you suddenly make him become embarassed by a waitress’s desire and make him deactivate his skills, nonsense
Why give him the skill if you want to keep it deactivated
Didn’t he receive a +1 to all his abilities when he just cleared his last quest for not depending on system shop too much and training on his own? WHy does he still have abilities at level 1 like full counter and angel’s blessing?
What’s the point of making him tall handsome and strong when you ultimately portray him as an idiot? What a waste of resources
You should leave everything to him, but first you should give your absolute best
Have they stopped using the confundus and potential remedy they used in the 1st and 2nd year that lasts for a month?
And what about the portkey trophy at the end? How will he handle that
Now I’m sure he is under a confundus charm again, that explains all his stupid choices this whole last year
Has he started to act like an idiot suddenly?
Emma
I’ve commented in many fanfics before, the best house for transmigrators is slytherin if pureblood and ravenclaw otherwise
What a great wish wasted on a trash. It’s true what they say, it’s not the car that wins the race, it’s the driver who drives it.
He has all the resources in the universe in infinite amount and he thinks of trying to make money in a few years and that too with an app 😐 He can earn more money than that in a year if he sold fucking fruits and vegetables from earth 🤯
Very lousy service
I have a suggestion author-san, if narcissa is part vampire and that’s the cause of her bond, then shouldn’t be surnamed drakul instead of ashwood if she marries the mc. And since house greengrass already has connections with house ashwood, then leave that surname to one of them. Just a suggestion