The story was a bit slow in the beginning. But it slowly builds up and becomes interesting once the character gets into the game. I love how the character slowly learns how to use his powers instead of getting it right from the beginning, making the story feel much more realistic. I also love that the author makes use of such colourful vocabulary, it is really well written. Really love the different spelling of words to mimic the different accents. Not a big fan of games but really interested to see how this goes and what is in store for the MC.

Small typo at the end *He