I've enjoyed the story so far. despite having a system the mc doesn't feel just stupidly op from the get go. I think the ability skills would be better if he had to create his own after the initial ones given by the ability books or purchase but that's just my view. overall a great start to an adventure

cany wait to see the novel develop

great chapter thanks for the read

while only the first chapter is out at the time of writing this. the author makes sure to draw you in with intrigue and makes you ask those 1st chapter questions.