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Why did you decide to make her so bloody weak, she can move at like mach 20 and is way way way stronger than allmight not to mention she could just put nomu asleep. Not to mention the several points in the series where she used multiple shadowclones? Is this just a subtle nerf or did I miss something?
This honestly seems like the best, it both fits in with the world and what he can do while paying homage to Naruto.
is that an Odin reference?
My dude ....... I feel you.
Generic and awesome are not always mutually exclusive
Why does the main character constantly get given random new powers that have no build up or proper explanation? Why do none of the characters have any development? Why is the female main character refered to as a he or himself all the time? Why do all the characters from naruto either act stupid or completely contrary to what we saw of their personalities in the series? Why does the story line despite being coherent not actually make much sense? To get all these questions and more stuck in your head read this story!
Look mate I have been enjoying your story and you are clearly a talented writer but at this point the story is just depressing and I can’t continue reading it for my own mental health, I really, truly believe that this story could be improved if their was less focus on the shear artistic misery you are putting your main character through.