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TamerKing1mthCommentedNo! It's better to have chances than no chances for a cheat ya know
A Golden Finger that couldn't be activated was worse than not having one at all.- TamerKing1yrPosted
Finally, it's back with a new face HAHAHAHA I already forgot how many iterations this story has, I do hope that this will be final! The world-building is a chef's kiss, to be honest even way back in the first version, but I do like the new iterations because every time it comes back everything is better. I like that it still has the same style of writing, it's very traditional compared to the mainstream genres and style. It feels like a good break from all these system-based stories. I like how the book gave us an introduction to the place where our protagonist will start his journey. It gives me the feeling that the story will have a lot to offer. It gives a sense of security that there is more ahead of us to expect, There is a new world for us to unravel and know. And for that alone, I'll give it a 5 star for world-building. I love stories that have lores and histories the most! I like how he's shrouded in mystery and will be likened to an orange that we had to peel to see or eat what is inside. For the other character that already appeared, I'll say that they had personalities of their own, (Spoilers ahead I think?) Yul is quite chic and cool but a people-loving individual, Ojhin? he's an individual who has a sense of patriotism in him and will run his mouth if it's about his country. As for Master Yoo, your cliche nerve-wracking, and annoying master. As for Yeji, A tsundere is as simple as that. Also for the commander or something or king, I forgot, I think he's someone prideful, but his sense of pride encompasses his country and his people so he's very inclined to listen to their ideas, but he's very boastful and conceited that he might get his people killedđ luckily he has his people to give him some slack. As for other characters, I don't have deep impressions of them yet. So for now a 5-star characterization for this greatly fleshed-out character! (They had personalities OmO) The writing is a chef's kiss, easily understandable but I think some of the words used are too deep and also quite unnecessary, it defeats the feeling but it's only for my preference, others might like it!! Story development, I'll stay quiet about this for now, but I'm really expecting a lot!!! So 5 stars for my wish! Updating stability, No comment for now because it's still early! But please do update weekly even if you couldn't do it daily. 5 stars for my supportđ. A piece of advice to the author, you're already doing a nice job, I could say that the stories you produce are above the standards. You just need more perseverance, focus, and confidence, and maybe tone down your perfectionist side a little bit. Reading a story with an ending is far better than bits and pieces, you authors won't suffer but as readers, we suffer when authors stop updating! That's all I'll stop with being dramatic.
- TamerKing1yrCommented
What an introduction, so reminiscent of chinese novels when introducing a female lead prospect
The woman is stunningly beautiful, with mesmerizing upturned cat eyes that shone like dark golden orbs. Her black hair cascaded down her chest and shoulders in a lustrous wave, and her beige skin is smooth and willowy. She stands at a height of 5 feet and 6 inches, slender and graceful. Even in the dim hallway and clad in a thick nightdress, her beauty radiates and commands attention. Every detail of her appearance, from the delicate arch of her brows to the fullness of her lips, is perfection. Her demeanor is equally captivating, with a poised and dignified bearing that exuded confidence and grace. She is a vision of charm, a goddess among mortals. - TamerKing1yrReplied to sholo_bolo
But alas they need licenses, passes, or the like. Order for society. For the tamer degree
"The Investigation Corps is basically a suicide squad. As long as I join the reserve army, I'll be able to receive a high amount of allowance, and the only condition for applying is to have a pet with a star level. Those in the reserve army don't need to enter the dark fog. Instead, I'll only need to investigate the secret realms in the wild, which is relatively much safer. The only thing that is of potential danger is that if the dark fog comes, I'll have to be of use if they need me to go forward to block it. That being said, It's been more than ten years since the dark fog has come to Anping City. It should be very safe. Most importantly, if I perform well, it's said that there'll be chances to directly enter Beastmaster University for further studies," Wang Ye sighed. - TamerKing3yrCommented
jinx
"Don't worry, tonight will be the night that Death will stop ignoring you." she responded and started walking toward him. - TamerKing3yrCommented
Damn it he's using usđŁ
I would build a 'story' that didn't fall to any myths. - TamerKing3yrCommented
Spoilers keeps the readers awayđ
He was destroyed without a trace.