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What “urination”???? I don’t think LQX is so crass right???
Correction : he is a martial “artiste” or martial arts “practitioner” but he is not martial arts itself
Correction: affection to “her” s she is female and not “him” which is male
Correction: it’s “impending” war and not “impeding”.
…….. Information that the author thinks is not relevant so nothing more is provided ?
Correction: Acquaintances
Correction: it’s “familial” and not “familiar” relationships
Correction: had “dresses”
It would be better to use the word “seen” and “see” instead of “watched” and “Watch” about the city viewing
A better word to use is “royal” and not “regal” in this context.
It seems like she was threatening him. Why does he say appalling?
I don’t think the word “inn” used is the right one for their residences. Should it be “palace”?
Correction: getting “ready” - the “y” is missing
Correction: when the “latter” and not “letter”
Correction: than he “expected” not “accepted”
Correction: even if he “went” in
Should it be “big” and not “bog”?
It is with “bated” breath and not “bait” for luring prey to a trap.
You are right! Although is would be interesting if she was messaging her chin 😜