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  • FloSGP
    FloSGP6d
    Commented

    What “urination”???? I don’t think LQX is so crass right???

    Old Master Long thought about his grandson's urination and shook his head. If this grandson of his could become much better, he would not worry so much when he was dealing with this brat.
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    Astral Flower
    Sci-fi · Sorahana
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    FloSGP18d
    Commented

    Correction : he is a martial “artiste” or martial arts “practitioner” but he is not martial arts itself

    He was already in his fifties and had already felt the decline in his body. As a martial arts and also a bit of medical practitioner, he was naturally aware that his body was no longer as good as he used to be. 
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    Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower
    History · Sorahana
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    FloSGP18d
    Commented

    Correction: affection to “her” s she is female and not “him” which is male

    Yan Xi also asked a few questions about Nan Hua's situation and Nan Hua answered each and every single one of them patiently. It was clear that she was willing to accept Yan Xi's affection to him. 
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    Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower
    History · Sorahana
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    FloSGP18d
    Commented

    Correction: it’s “impending” war and not “impeding”.

    Nan Hua didn't want to make trouble and made their journey much longer than necessary. The impeding war will start soon and Long Qian Xing and General Jun had to be in the position where they were needed. 
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    Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower
    History · Sorahana
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  • FloSGP
    FloSGP1mth
    Commented

    …….. Information that the author thinks is not relevant so nothing more is provided ?

    Their other characteristic also emphasizes in their…
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    Astral Flower
    Sci-fi · Sorahana
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    FloSGP6mth
    Commented

    Correction: Acquaintances

    But when he heard Long Qian Xing calling his daughter politely, he was also displeased. It was as if what he treasured was not valued by others and instead treated as nothing more than ac quittances.
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    Astral Flower
    Sci-fi · Sorahana
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  • FloSGP
    FloSGP1yr
    Posted

    Great story with good development and tempo.

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    This Princess is Wild
    · 1819
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    FloSGP1yr
    Commented

    Correction: it’s “familial” and not “familiar” relationships

    At the same time, he learned how to influence his other cousins to do what he wanted them to do. It might sound despicable, but he knew that it was simply used or being used. There was not much familiar relationship between him and his other cousins, who only wanted to use him as a stepping stone.
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    Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower
    History · Sorahana
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    FloSGP1yr
    Commented

    Correction: had “dresses”

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    The Masked prince
    History · Ada_5253
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    FloSGP1yr
    Commented

    It would be better to use the word “seen” and “see” instead of “watched” and “Watch” about the city viewing

    Li Rui came out of her trance and nodded her head vigorously like a child. It might be strange but after so many years of her life, she had not even watched the whole Imperial City completely. 
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    His Rui
    History · Ada_5253
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    FloSGP1yr
    Commented

    A better word to use is “royal” and not “regal” in this context.

    They reached the greeting hall soon and found regal members and Court ministers were already present there. Sheng Li first greeted the Emperor and Empress followed by the three consorts and a concubine. Ying Lili did the same and two were told to take their respective seats.
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    Married To The Cruel Crown Prince
    History · Light_ray
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  • FloSGP
    FloSGP1yr
    Commented

    It seems like she was threatening him. Why does he say appalling?

    Seeing the tiny smile on the crown prince's lips, Xue Yu-Yan felt strange. "Xue, you are appalling me?" Sheng Li raised his brow with inquisitiveness.
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    Married To The Cruel Crown Prince
    History · Light_ray
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    FloSGP1yr
    Commented

    I don’t think the word “inn” used is the right one for their residences. Should it be “palace”?

    As he was going to the Inn, he encountered the fourth Prince, Han Nianzu who bowed his head slightly and asked him from where he was coming. "I was in the dungeon, brother Zu," replied Sheng Li.
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    Married To The Cruel Crown Prince
    History · Light_ray
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  • FloSGP
    FloSGP1yr
    Commented

    Correction: getting “ready” - the “y” is missing

    The next morning, when Zhao Zhuang Chen was getting read, his Eunuch told him that Yun Weilan wanted to see him. 
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    His Rui
    History · Ada_5253
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    FloSGP1yr
    Commented

    Correction: when the “latter” and not “letter”

    He could explain General Li's presence saying that the letter was here to meet his daughter but he couldn't explain Yi Junjie's presence in his manor. 
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    His Rui
    History · Ada_5253
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  • FloSGP
    FloSGP1yr
    Commented

    Correction: than he “expected” not “accepted”

    The old master's reaction was different from what his disciple had accepted. He hmphed more coldly and said in a sharp voice.
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    His Rui
    History · Ada_5253
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    FloSGP1yr
    Commented

    Correction: even if he “went” in

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    Forgotten Legend of the Bloodied Flower
    History · Sorahana
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    FloSGP1yr
    Commented

    Should it be “big” and not “bog”?

    After knowing what kind of bog reach Xi Ying has in investigating the matters, he was afraid that Xi Ying would find out something that he shouldn't. 
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    His Rui
    History · Ada_5253
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    FloSGP1yr
    Commented

    It is with “bated” breath and not “bait” for luring prey to a trap.

    Zhao Zhang Wei took a long pause. Everyone waited for him to finish his words with a baited breath. Zhao Zhuang Chen, who was relieved after hearing Zhao Zhang Wei's words, looked completely unbothered now. He didn't care who killed Zhao Zhang Wei's mother or if she really died a natural death. 
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    His Rui
    History · Ada_5253
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  • FloSGP
    FloSGP1yr
    Commented

    You are right! Although is would be interesting if she was messaging her chin 😜

    Qin Wenya stared at him for a few moments in silence and then chuckled suddenly. She threw away Zhao Wang Lei's hand from her chin. As she stood up, she messaged her chin gently and spoke
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    His Rui
    History · Ada_5253
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