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He is the only guard. Thus this is a truthful statement, just misleading information.
Wall-mart sells guns so no surprise in them being in the office. The sword os a little much. Just pretend it is a machete from the outdoors section.
I rather like your story so fa and would be rather depressed if you either drastically changed your current pace. As others have mentioned this leaves plenty of room for the growth of the main character, plot and world. but I am in favor of the main characters calm non playboy style. It is refreshing to read and I have enjoyed the story so far so more chapters.[img=update]